Shhh! Did she notice us...?

The keyhole could use a bit more work, also, try and make it so that you understand you're looking through a door... maybe a doornob?



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Yeah i agree with MR Productions in that it would look better if you had a doorknob in there or maaybe something else to help you understand your looking through a door.... i think the keyholes fine though.



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How is positioned on the other side that you can see onlyher head ?

The keyhole, can be improved.. But I like the overall concept (:

Concept is pretty sweet, need to maybe have a noticeable doorknob or maybe even make the shirt a bit more textured to make it known that it's a door.

It's an interesting design. I agree about that it may need a bit of texture to enhance the wood. And perhaps a bit of shading on the metal around the hole, since the girl is made in very high contrast black and white.



Thanks for looking at my critique,

but some people can be a bit cranky if you only write things like "i really like the concept please check my design". I just thought you should know.

Keep up the good work.

yeah, i thought it was a peanut.change it to where you can understand what it is better.

I've seen this done before. I not saying you copied it, but this looked a lot better.

dig it just not the yellow but I would wear it in grean yellow, great concept



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I would change the shirt color so that it looks like metal or wood for the keyhole. Right now it looks more like eggs, which isn't what you're going for.

Cool concept!

I don't the link I linked works, so here's original auction. I know of the design because I own that shirt, not that shirt. I don't know if you'd want to do the design after seeing it's been done before, but if anything you can take a cue from it's simplicity.

Definitely agree about the doorknob. Also is this supposed to be Alice in Wonderland?

I agreed with everyone here that the doorknob should more in detail,and make it more 'sturdy'.



Nice concept,keep up working^^