oops deleted my critique accidently

text is hard to read

made lettering more visible

i think you want to make either the 'sweet' bigger or the 'salty' smaller

made the word sweet bigger

any other comments or suggestions?

wanted to make water line more visible

if you click needs work could you plese let me know what needs work?

v.4 )

what the...?



I wrote v.4

BLAST!



I wrote that I like the lighter water. version 3 better than version 4.

i liked the original subtlety of your original versions. i think your colors are getting too bright and the design too flashy. and i must say i like the sweet smaller but that's me...

yes i think the colors are a bit too bright now as well.

but I like the sweet larger .

I will probably sumit version 3

lightened colors again

Sweeet.

SourBitch- you must be so tired of this design. Glad you like it though. : )

it's cute!

I submitted this design v5

Hot. 5$