8 color on white tee. Any comments and opinions are welcome. Thanks!

Thanks JC. Still have some editings to do. I am thinking to add a speech baloon that says ''noob''.

ahaha. i'll just try and see how it looks like. Noob is a very common word in gaming world that's why i choose it. I leave it if it won't look good. Thanks for the advice.

burp!

great idea and great illustration. I also agree that color choce might need work but it is very strong already.



Please critique mine also.



Heart of Gold

thanks guy, maybe i can change the colorway by using some halftones for the Dark grey shading. Also i have in mind to add some Soda cans underneath him.

BOOMB!

Good job.

I believe a speech ballon would make it less strong.

If you don't need one - don't add one.

Some soda cans could be nice.



I would love to have your vote.

I think if you need ANY text, you should have the sweater say 1337.

any gamer will instantly get that. I'd kinda like to see it on a grey shirt (same colour as sweater) and have a white gradient circle from the middle to kinda give that radiating god power effect.



I could really use some advice on my throwback design if you could spare a moment!

I like it like this... don't put a speech bubble. I also really like those colors. I do agree that if you want text, it should be on the hoodie. But I wouldn't even do that.



The only thing I'd say to change it make the shadow a bit more noticeable on the tee.



Comments Welcome:

Ski Lift Love

this is sick ! i think its ready to be honest, nice work.



http://www.threadless.com/critique/57569/Jellyfish advice appreciated

Does it has to be an alien, can it be a regular teen?

You could have the arms simulating movement, and call it multitasking

I have seen my kids multitasking it seems like they have more than two arms

oowkey everyone thanks for the feedback.

-blind: i already tried the speech bubble and it sucked so maybe i can use it on the hoodie to see how it looks, i'll surely try the circle idea too.



v2 coming tomorrow...

whaha fantastic!



Maybe if you have time you can comment/critique my new design Skully Hearts - Night Vision, i'm havin' trouble deciding on the colors…

Ready to go! Ha, the old school SNES pad is in there too!

greaat

added soda cans, played with color tones. Any comments are welcome!

What about spreading out the empty cans a bit. Or maybe just add one that has rolled away. It is a bit tidy for a gamer, is it not?

They look good, by the way.

haha nice nice!



Remember my Skully Hearts design, before I sub it I would like your opinion about the presentation (the latest or 1st version? Thanks!

wow thanks people. It's a great idea to put one rolling. I'll do that.

bubump

cool and nice..



Comment mine..

http://www.threadless.com/critique/57751/It_s_Winter

v3 (hopefully the final one) coming next week, i'll redraw the shoes i don't like their position. If there's anything else you want to add fell free (bump)

Excellent!

it has a better shade of green today.. i didn't know he's a gamefreak.. lol..





it you have time pls visit my critique ^_~):

http://www.threadless.com/critique/57396/FALLing_for_you#v2

bomb!

Cool !

thanks gums! v3 is coming soon, i think it will be the last.

Hi, just checking in with ya design, can wait for the next version.



Also I want to thank you again for your crit on my Skully Hearts, its finally up for voting!

8 color on white tee. Final Version!!!

Redrawed the front shoe and added shading to shoes. Played with the cans position and redone the shadow. This is the last version before i submit so any opinion is welcome for the last time. Thanks.

Thanks JC!

If you did not submit this yet:

I would place the cans next to his shadow, not inside it. This here looks too placed if you know what I mean...



Maybe you can help me out with my ideas...

Milkotov Cocktail

good remark Knaros, i'll push them a little bit out of the shadow before submitting. Thanks.

I totally love that! I'll buy it :P







can you check my critique?

thanks!

Great! Nice improvements! Love it on the white. She's ready to submit in my opinion.



Thanks for the comments on my last one - could you help me in choosing a color for this one?

Rainbow Shuttle

thank you srhutch!

I've just busted out my old nintento NES so I need this shirt tonight :o)



Please check out mine :o)

I would submit this but I wouldn't mind seeing some other kind of junk food below, also cans seem to neatly organized for some one in his condition.

haha my old sega systems are standing in front of me. My mastersystem and megadrive. I tried to disorganise the cans but it doesn't look good as a composition, so i preferred to do it this way. Thanks for the comment Fear!

Look's cool. I can't think of anything I'd add. Great work!



Please crit mine!

Thanks i am currently preparing the presantation file. I hope it will be on voting next week.

winner..great idea and great execution..i'll give you $5..submit it..



please citique mine





Skater From Grave

thanks maphia!

The cans turned out good.

I would not want to taste that soda. (carbonated ink?)

What is next? Experiment with background and submit?



Thanks for commenting my crit. I would love to know if you have any ideas, though.

Thanks for all the help and cool suggestions. Here's the submitted version. Get ready to vote here

up on !voting