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MEKAZOO on Dec 01 '09
8 color on white tee. Any comments and opinions are welcome. Thanks!
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MEKAZOO on Dec 01 '09
Thanks JC. Still have some editings to do. I am thinking to add a speech baloon that says ''noob''.
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MEKAZOO on Dec 01 '09
ahaha. i'll just try and see how it looks like. Noob is a very common word in gaming world that's why i choose it. I leave it if it won't look good. Thanks for the advice.
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MEKAZOO on Dec 01 '09
burp!
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scmonteagudo on Dec 01 '09
great idea and great illustration. I also agree that color choce might need work but it is very strong already.
Please critique mine also. Heart of Gold |
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MEKAZOO on Dec 01 '09
thanks guy, maybe i can change the colorway by using some halftones for the Dark grey shading. Also i have in mind to add some Soda cans underneath him.
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MEKAZOO on Dec 01 '09
BOOMB!
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Fonus on Dec 01 '09
Good job.
I believe a speech ballon would make it less strong. If you don't need one - don't add one. Some soda cans could be nice. I would love to have your vote. |
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Blind Pixel on Dec 01 '09
I think if you need ANY text, you should have the sweater say 1337.
any gamer will instantly get that. I'd kinda like to see it on a grey shirt (same colour as sweater) and have a white gradient circle from the middle to kinda give that radiating god power effect. I could really use some advice on my throwback design if you could spare a moment! |
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srhutch2 on Dec 01 '09
I like it like this... don't put a speech bubble. I also really like those colors. I do agree that if you want text, it should be on the hoodie. But I wouldn't even do that.
The only thing I'd say to change it make the shadow a bit more noticeable on the tee. Comments Welcome: Ski Lift Love |
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matthewallen on Dec 01 '09
this is sick ! i think its ready to be honest, nice work.
http://www.threadless.com/critique/57569/Jellyfish advice appreciated |
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soloyo on Dec 01 '09
Does it has to be an alien, can it be a regular teen?
You could have the arms simulating movement, and call it multitasking I have seen my kids multitasking it seems like they have more than two arms |
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MEKAZOO on Dec 02 '09
oowkey everyone thanks for the feedback.
-blind: i already tried the speech bubble and it sucked so maybe i can use it on the hoodie to see how it looks, i'll surely try the circle idea too. v2 coming tomorrow... |
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hotspot on Dec 02 '09
whaha fantastic!
Maybe if you have time you can comment/critique my new design Skully Hearts - Night Vision, i'm havin' trouble deciding on the colors… |
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Boycey on Dec 02 '09
Ready to go! Ha, the old school SNES pad is in there too!
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targam on Dec 03 '09
greaat
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MEKAZOO on Dec 03 '09
added soda cans, played with color tones. Any comments are welcome!
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Fonus on Dec 03 '09
What about spreading out the empty cans a bit. Or maybe just add one that has rolled away. It is a bit tidy for a gamer, is it not?
They look good, by the way. |
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hotspot on Dec 03 '09
haha nice nice!
Remember my Skully Hearts design, before I sub it I would like your opinion about the presentation (the latest or 1st version? Thanks! |
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MEKAZOO on Dec 04 '09
wow thanks people. It's a great idea to put one rolling. I'll do that.
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MEKAZOO on Dec 04 '09
bubump
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mercfarrell on Dec 04 '09
cool and nice..
Comment mine.. http://www.threadless.com/critique/57751/It_s_Winter |
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MEKAZOO on Dec 04 '09
v3 (hopefully the final one) coming next week, i'll redraw the shoes i don't like their position. If there's anything else you want to add fell free (bump)
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superflyinmonke on Dec 04 '09
Excellent!
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deso35 on Dec 04 '09
it has a better shade of green today.. i didn't know he's a gamefreak.. lol..
it you have time pls visit my critique ^_~): http://www.threadless.com/critique/57396/FALLing_for_you#v2 |
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MEKAZOO on Dec 05 '09
bomb!
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Cool !
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MEKAZOO on Dec 05 '09
thanks gums! v3 is coming soon, i think it will be the last.
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hotspot on Dec 08 '09
Hi, just checking in with ya design, can wait for the next version.
Also I want to thank you again for your crit on my Skully Hearts, its finally up for voting! |
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MEKAZOO on Dec 08 '09
8 color on white tee. Final Version!!!
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MEKAZOO on Dec 08 '09
Redrawed the front shoe and added shading to shoes. Played with the cans position and redone the shadow. This is the last version before i submit so any opinion is welcome for the last time. Thanks.
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MEKAZOO on Dec 09 '09
Thanks JC!
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Knarostopopel on Dec 09 '09
If you did not submit this yet:
I would place the cans next to his shadow, not inside it. This here looks too placed if you know what I mean... Maybe you can help me out with my ideas... Milkotov Cocktail |
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MEKAZOO on Dec 09 '09
good remark Knaros, i'll push them a little bit out of the shadow before submitting. Thanks.
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SaMtRoNiKa on Dec 09 '09
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MEKAZOO on Dec 09 '09
thanks!
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srhutch2 on Dec 09 '09
Great! Nice improvements! Love it on the white. She's ready to submit in my opinion.
Thanks for the comments on my last one - could you help me in choosing a color for this one? Rainbow Shuttle |
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MEKAZOO on Dec 09 '09
thank you srhutch!
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Fear for the Folk on Dec 09 '09
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Fear for the Folk on Dec 09 '09
I would submit this but I wouldn't mind seeing some other kind of junk food below, also cans seem to neatly organized for some one in his condition.
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MEKAZOO on Dec 09 '09
haha my old sega systems are standing in front of me. My mastersystem and megadrive. I tried to disorganise the cans but it doesn't look good as a composition, so i preferred to do it this way. Thanks for the comment Fear!
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MEKAZOO on Dec 10 '09
Thanks i am currently preparing the presantation file. I hope it will be on voting next week.
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Maphia Phamily on Dec 10 '09
winner..great idea and great execution..i'll give you $5..submit it..
please citique mine Skater From Grave |
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MEKAZOO on Dec 10 '09
thanks maphia!
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Fonus on Dec 10 '09
The cans turned out good.
I would not want to taste that soda. (carbonated ink?) What is next? Experiment with background and submit? Thanks for commenting my crit. I would love to know if you have any ideas, though. |


