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AndreeArt
AndreeArt on Nov 25 '09
This design was inspired by a dream I used to have as a child. This is just the rough sketch; I haven't decided yet on the color palette I'm gonna use so any suggestions are welcomed! :):):)

Hope you like!
YaaH
   YaaH on Nov 26 '09
Go to the link that I gave you for the color idea.

And the placement make it big on the tee please.

I can't wait to see it ;D
RoeeSch
RoeeSch on Nov 26 '09
Nice idea. Kinda hard to say something smart at the moment (its very initial), but it is an interesting idea that is worth working on.
thedeetzes
   thedeetzes on Nov 26 '09
I really like it. Doing it all in black and white could be cool. Or maybe all black and white except for like fushia hair or an acid green dress or something.
surreal_blue
surreal_blue on Nov 26 '09
Neat-o. The idea is pretty interesting and I like the style of the girl. However, I'm not sure where you are going with the swirl design. It almost looks like a staircase, which would be cool. A total pain in the a$$ to do, but it would be cool.
iamalaayy
iamalaayy on Nov 26 '09
great idea :) show me what it looks like in color!
oygen
oygen on Nov 27 '09
cool idea, just get the inkings done and we will discuss colors
Smelynai
Smelynai on Nov 27 '09
just avoid copy/paste it is not acceptable.

and maybe all the girls shoud hang from outside of spiral?

black-white version is cool for me :)

we are waiting for your next try
Lissa-B
Lissa-B on Nov 28 '09
Very good work. I do think the 2nd face portion need to be changed up so it is different than the first image... i think that the body portion further down the spiral should maybe be reversed to look toward the outside of the spiral.

Other than that, the sketch looks good. If you do want to go with colors, bright colors to contrast with the black spiral maybe...
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S-y-m-p-h-o-n-y
S-y-m-p-h-o-n-y on Dec 01 '09
i'll may need to see another version before I can give you ideas..O and thanks for the tip.



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AndreeArt
AndreeArt on Dec 01 '09
Thank you all so much for all your awesome input, every time I come online there's a few more comments and I'm soaking it all up, loving it :):):)
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MsCrumblebottom
MsCrumblebottom on Jan 04 '10




If you have any time,



http://www.threadless.com/critique/59306/Please_Give_Me_A_Chance
AlexTheCat
AlexTheCat on Jan 04 '10
The first two girl images from the top are really great, but the second two don't really match the image. If you don't want to re-draw them, you might want to upside-down them; the gravity illusion is lost the way they are now; especially the third figure from the top as her hair is falling upward, like wth? :S



just another little note, the expression on her face is a bit hard to read, but maybe that'll come through once you ink it :)



otherwise, muchos love



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Ezahn
Ezahn on Mar 02 '10
coool also in black and white



check mine

http://www.threadless.com/critique/62850/red_cappuccet
Ezahn
Ezahn on Mar 02 '10
coool also in black and white



check mine

http://www.threadless.com/critique/62850/red_cappuccet
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Smelynai
Smelynai on Mar 09 '10
where is NEW version? :)
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