2 colors on black shirt



comments?

It looks very cool. Maybe it's just me, but I don't understand it! The art is great though. I don't have an suggestions besides - is there some way the meaning can be made clearer?

can you please score mine?

I'm not sure i understand it. What is the white circle on the ground? I like the space idea but .. ooooh is it the earth? no. sorry i dont really get it. i think it'll be cooler if you can clarify it through your art.



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What is the circle on the ground for?

yeeeees, Its the earth, mmm and he is on space

mmmhhh... is it too hard to get it?, any help here?



The earth someday will die, then, somebody has to clean the mess right?

yea I didnt get it.

fill in a little bit more of the earth so you can really tell that's what it is, like a little more of the water so it outlines a couple continents.



mine needs help !

thanks guys,



the circule is kind of the line that the police draw in the flor, (when somebody die). The blue color (water) is suposed to be the blood,



mmmmhhh.... I'm lost, I dont know what to do here,

I wanted simple, but... I think this one, looks better,



any comments?



Gracias seņor@s!

The corpse outline was a good idea but I would never have guessed what it was; this pic says "Earth" a lot better in some weird way. When I look at it I can't describe quite what's happening, but it generates thought rather than just making me go "Huh?" like the first one did. I like the overall look of the design, especially on blue. Would it be better mid-sized on the tee rather than large?

oh yeah, I didn't read anything before I saw the image, and I immediately realised it was Earth.

yeah, thanks... mmmmhhh... placement smarller?

*smaller

Is the cosmic janitor mopping or sweeping? It's hard to tell. Silhouettes can be tough b/c you have to (more often than not) over state certain elements in order for them to be recognizable. So in regards to that, if it's a broom, i would include a dustpan somewhere. If it's a mop then the bucket should be a more universal looking pail. It's a pretty interesting idea.

maybe try galaxy insteed earth or whatitisnow :)

container smaller please and without stars in it. container shoud be like black hole- there will dissapear our galaxy...

Cool!! Great idea..I think if u add more starts will be more beautiful..



Check out mine

http://www.threadless.com/critique/57259/The_Truth_from_Fingerprints

thanks guys, the galaxy sounds great, but I want to stay with the earth idea... and yes, it is a broom, I like the COSMIC JANITOR thing, maybe for the title??

This is a good shirt. I agree that the trash can should be smaller, maybe more like a bucket. I also agree that it should be solid inside, no stars. I think the blues in the earth might stand out more if this was a black shirt, instead of dark blue.

any suggestions for me?

VERSION III,



I changed the bucket, the mop, some stars, and I add a caution (wet) sign,

I'm going to change the title to Cosmic Janitor (thanks surreal-blue),



any comments?

thanks for the help guys!

SA-weeet! The earth landmass isn't quite recognizable enough. I am pretty sure that's the Eurasian continent, but it's still a bit amorphous. The sign was a nice detail. I usually don't like type on most things, but this was integrated well. Also the lowest hand could use a little more defining in the fingers. That's pretty minor though.







*You're welcome.

thanks man... about the earth, I like it that way, I dont want it to recognizable, just water and dirt



thanks

I think the earth should be green and blue instead of brown and blue. The rest of this is pretty great though. Also, try and make some of the continent shapes in the earth mass. You can't really tell its earth. But not bad at all. Great concept!



Would you mind rating and commenting on my sub'd design?

http://www.threadless.com/submission/242461/Coup_d_Ear

thanks, any other?

any?

bump

add some green to your earth puddle, maybe a few more planets... and in the bucket instead of the background color put the earth puddle color in it, great concept btw





Drop a score and comment? much appreciated!

Here! :D



and Here!

I got that it was Earth from v2, but different people respond to different visual cues, so a bit more clarity mightn't hurt, like maybe the things iamalaayy suggested.

New V.



Now simulated process on black shirt



any comments?



gracias



m.

Really nice changes you've made! I'd just like the "P" in "Planet" to be a bit more identifiable. Other than that, it looks great!

Also, maybe a bit lower on the shirt.

agree about the 'p', i really like this, have thought about giving him a blue collar , like 'blue collar workers'?





Can you give mine a look and please don't vote if it doesn't come with constructive criticism

Looks great on black. Very dynamic.

yeah, thanks, I'm going to work on the P, the background and the earth (some halftone efect I think)



any other comment?



gracias muchachos

any other comment?

awesome..work a little bit on the earth maybe..





please crit mine

Skater From Grave

I think the changes you're working on should cover it. You're doing some good stuff here.

i like the message of this design but the earth needs some work

when u get the chance check out my design

http://www.threadless.com/submission/245200/Follow_the_Music

Haha that's genius! very cool concept!

I don't have any new criticism, but after you make those changes suggested by everyone else it should be sweet to submit

Very nice! Great job, I say submit :)



please critique mine

yeah, thanks, I'm going to work on the earth, and the background, some halftone efect in both



thanks, a lot

oh yeah that'll be sad.. :(



i suggest adding Mars, the asteroid belt, Jupiter and Saturn in the background so that people will know that the picture is in the solar system... :)





have extra time? pls check out mine: http://www.threadless.com/critique/58304/Planning_to_ruin_Christmas

hmm i like the idea. maybe som earth drips in the bucket?



Would love to hear your comment on my Skully Hearts design, Thanks!

the inside of the bucket needs help, otherwise, it's see-through.and i'd fix the P as well. otherwise, you're set sir.



could ya help me out, please.

pretty good! And it's 10X better than te first version.

can you critique mine?

I like this idea, I think you are getting there. I have to say watch your curves you can see some flaws here and there IE: the handle on the bucket, his left hand and left pant leg.



Also, your P looks like and F and the ellipse on your bucket is not perspectively correct to our viewing plain, it should be even more tilted.



Keep at it this, it could be a winner.



Show some love:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/57415/Tree_People

Take the pale and put it to the left i.e. left of the workers leg or in the lower left hand corner in tandem with the sign & then make the earth puddle larger, at least covering the area where the pale is now or bigger, say at least 5X the size of the mop head. It's very cool!

Very Good, I think its ready to submit. I like it.

Very cool! The changes through the versions have really brought the idea to a strong point. I like the green, more recognizable continents, and the smaller bucket. Good to go!

NEW VERSION,

ITS NOT FINISHED, BUT, I WANT YOURE OPINION =)

Nice concept man, I really dig this shirt

Maybe you could put a tag on the goy cleaning it, someone who is a agent of social change, obama perhaps? or something that is trying to change the world for the better



Check the design, suggest things and Ill return the favor,and you get a free lollipop:D

Couldnt earth (as a round earth) be right under his broom .. ?

ı'd like to see that man clear.without planets around him

NEW, any comments here? (not finished, still work to do)

Thanks

wow! submit it!

I still have work to do on the Caution thing, and other details (earth, etc)

The New Title: Cosmic Janitor



What about the placement?

very cool! I really like v4 and 5 too :)

Cool concept! I like the placement of V6. Have you thought about using a Super Glow ink?



If you get a second could you critique the new versions of my designs please!



http://www.threadless.com/critique/63199/Corporate_Robot



http://www.threadless.com/critique/63304/Damn_you_Scuba_Steve#v2

I think this version is a great experiment but I prefer the clarity of the previous versions. You could possibly compromise betweent the two looks by keeping the v6 figure but adding a clearer 'planet puddle'. It's great to see you continuing the design!

yea, thanks guys, I'm working on the details, and the earth, what about the placement, any comments there?

Final Version?, What do you think?

Title: "Cosmic Janitor"

Very Nice!! I like this version the most!

submit it :)

thanks, what about placement?

special Ink for the planet?

Wow, i looked at the first version and the difference is mad. I really like this one and i can really imagine it on a T. Seeing as everyone nowadays is really into the whole saving the planet thing i think it will do well and the message really stands out.

Well done.



Mine is up for scoring, have a look please:

It's all OK

you got the idea, thanks, we all have to think green

hola?

Its ready. Submit it!



If you get a chance, i would appreciate a critique, Eye Scotty

theres one DONT SUBMIT, from who =O

mmm about the Title: "Cosmic Janitor" or "Cleaning the mess" vote please!



Thanks

Cosmic janitor!

love it btw

Thanks cupcake,

any other?

I dig that. Submit!!!



Help me out.TwoChe

then Cosmic janitor

what about placement?

Very cool, submit it :)



Please take a look on mine and please give me some feedback. thanks!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/63627/Happy_Mop

Thanks, placement?

I think it needs to be larger on the tee, almost to the point where a bit of the bucket and the dead planet sign is on the side of the teeshirt, and the janitor's head is in chest area.

ok so placement upper

Yeah I think an upper placement would be better, anyway that's a good design.

sweet

Im thinking on using some UV special Ink for the Earth....

it would be great to see the earth handled as delicately as the rest

This is dope!



If you get a chance, i would appreciate a critique, Eye Scotty

Meddingkid, what do you mean....and... CWS: Whats Dope,

well, the stance, drafting skill and rendering execution of the janitor looks like it has been handled by a different artist than that of the earth. I'm assuming that the earth is a puddle tha needs to be mopped up, so maybe some atmospherics, and a hint of recflection of the bucket and mop (stars) in it? Earth just looks a bit harsh for what is otherwise a really nicely rendered illustration - see what I mean?

I know what you mean Meddingkid, but I wanted to be just an earth puddle with the less colors posible... thanks!

well I'm going to submit, as COSMIC JANITOR and Im going to put a SPECIAL UV INK (OPTIONAL) FOR EARTH,

Thaks Everyone

I love this!!! I would go for it as it is!





Please check out mine! :)