This is a redo of an old design. I have redesigned the figure. Flattened the shadow just gray and added a glow-in-the-dark feature.



4 colors + 1 glow-in-the-dark



It currently feels like it's lacking something. So, ideas?



Also, what color to place the design on?



Thanks in advance for all ideas and here are the first two threads.



Reflection of a Saint

Reflection of a Saint

Pretty darn cool!



Would you mind checking out my critique?

Would you mind checking out my critique?

Coup d'Ear

fun idea :) make the lines thicker and i'm sold!

thanks for the crit btw

nice idea

I really like this.

Thanks for the comments everyone. I'm liking it so far,but am more than welcoming ideas for improvement. Any help is good help.

the street lamp shouldn't be there imho...

especially since the shadow doesn't look quite right if the street lamp is the light source

I like this design! I'd change the placement a little bit. maybe make the design bigger and move it down a little bit. It's really cool though!



check out mine!

I like everything as is except for the shadow underneath the lamp...

is that Ryan Seacrest?

Haha... no, it's not Seacrest.



And, as far as the shadows, they are pretty accurate based on the streetlight positioning.

I like it! Perhaps without the lamp though?



If you can, could you please check out

GO PLAY

nice.



Could you make the shadow uv ink? angel by night, demon by day?



Looks ready to sub i think.



check out mine? thankx

November Equation

Really good. Placement works nicely.



It looks best on grey. and only qualm is with the base of the lamp post. it seems a bittle lit too stright. maybe I just dont see the detail tho.



Good design.



critique me please?

Wow, thanks for all the comments.



If I get rid of the lamp post, what should I add? I have tried designs without it and it feels very empty, which is also why I added the glow-in-the-dark ink to make it seem more important.

leave the lamp post, but make the devil more... well.. devilish. Don't bother with shadow accuracy, just make so it looks good and stands out - after all, that devil is a reflection of the inside... So... make the tail more wiggly, make the horns a bit more evident...



and if you have time , take a look at my devil

This is a redo of an old design. I have redesigned the figure. Flattened the shadow just gray and added a glow-in-the-dark feature.





4 colors + 1 glow-in-the-dark





It currently feels like it's lacking something. So, ideas?





Also, what color to place the design on?





Thanks in advance for all ideas and here are the first two threads.





Reflection of a Saint


Reflection of a Saint

Here are a few changes... mainly to shapes and connections. Horns larger, tail longer and shadows cleaner. What do people think? And, thanks for the comments so far. Hope to submit this soon so I can get back to what I'm suppose to be working on, and maybe a travel submission.

I really like this concept, very cool idea.

I think that the glow in the dark might be a bit unnecessary, as it doesn't contribute much to the meaning of the design.

Also, the perspective of the shadow seems a bit off, especially the tail.

I really like this design! I agree with ReLem on the perspective of the shadow. I think it could use a little tweaking.

Thanks for the comment. Any other ideas?

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