feels like it needs a bit more to come together?



any thoughts, crits, ideas welcome!

bump? nothin?

so I should pack my bags yes? :) or stick my head in the river?

durp! seriously, please give some crit yes?

I have no idea what Willkom means but it looks pretty good!



Would you mind checking out my critique?

Coup d'Ear

Personally I think it's good to go. Nice colouring and line work. Sub it for sure!



If you can, could you please check out

GO PLAY

I likes it. the dad guys right eye looks strange though. But I think its a sub too.



critique me

nice i like it!



help me with mine

http://www.threadless.com/critique/56951/Tune_ME

Very nice illo but I don't get the message.

the looks great! the colours really work!



check out my crit plz!



and a sub!

I'll check em all out. any more feedback? suggestions?

Looks nice!

The concept might be a little vague, but the illo is pretty cool.

Let us see the placement?

This is awesome. Amazing design and drawing skills here. Well done. I'd say submit it!



Could you check my design out please?

bumpa.

feels like it needs a bit more to come together?





any thoughts, crits, ideas welcome!

made some additions, eh?

ps. to me nothing says travel like tube socks and pretzels

I might reconsider the wilkum. whatever that is referencing will need explaination and that will quickly lower the score I feel. I don't think pretzels and tube socks say much for travel everything else is working pretty good. Love the style and colors.

I like the idea, but I would definitely say it needs a bit more. I don't like the repetitive elements as much... maybe vary them a bit? Color scheme is perfect. I also think that the top image should be the main design, not the house.



Critiques Welcome:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/57144/Snow_Flake

thanks for the feedback so far! i adjusted the scale of things and broke up some of the repetition a bit.



still working things through...

bump

anymore thoughts and comments welcome!

I like it...

It's just that the wilkum sign makes me unsure weather they are coming or going...

Please take a look at mine

love this! would you mind looking at mine? http://www.threadless.com/critique/57096/Home_Sweet_Home

makes no sense to me.

what dosent make sense?

i subbed it with a real explanation and everything! woah!

looks really good, you should submit!