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mister hill
mister hill on Nov 19 '09
The Articulate Gangster is far too smart for simple uneducated hand signs. They want to express themselves in more detail. To their peers they may be the same, but to others they are more than a 'Gangster'. To others they are a 'member of an organised group of criminals'



The hands have been roughly done at this stage due to me learning Illustrator along the way. I'm also yet to look into possible colouring and perhaps having two colours in addition to the black details.



Any ideas, thoughts, helpful advice would be awesome.
Crotch of Thorns
Crotch of Thorns on Nov 19 '09
hahahaha
simcha123456
simcha123456 on Nov 19 '09
very nice!!!!!

chek me out when you have time-thankyou :)
bennyd302
   bennyd302 on Nov 19 '09
hahaha really funny. I might try thickening the lines within the hands a bit.
alexmdc
   alexmdc on Nov 19 '09
I would work on the line weright a bit inside the hands right now they look a bit weird, maybe try adding another color? for shading, that would be kinda cool
mister hill
mister hill on Nov 19 '09
Cheers - I like how you've done it in "the Sharpener" - loved that design. I'll start practicing and see what I can come up with.
mister hill
mister hill on Nov 19 '09
Thanks alexmdc! I'm gonna have a go with colouring etc and we'll see how it comes up.



Cheers!
2 days later
Benboyin91
Benboyin91 on Nov 21 '09
this is pretty clever. the only thing i would say is make the lines in the hands darker, at very first glance i didn't get the joke, and it was really well drawn.
Benboyin91
Benboyin91 on Nov 21 '09
heres mine if you have time to check it out and give me advice

http://www.threadless.com/critique/56975/skate_and_create_doodle
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