I don't quite get it. Maybe my mind's just dull right now. If there's really anything to get, anyways. Lemme know if there is, then maybe I could think of something to say.
it's just a simple take on the theme, "connect"... maybe I make more waves or something in the lines connecting them... to create more interest, but I was going for a different style of print, that hasn't been done before. having a wrap around that would be one way for guys and another way for girls...
The old vs. modern concept doesn't jump out enough. Maybe getting a little creative with things you could put into the screen displays would work better than blank space.
It might be cool if the cords made some sort of shape. I like the simplicity and the colors are nice.
Another idea: maybe somehow make the computers look like the bathroom gender signs if you know what I'm talking about... like the monitors are the heads. Yeah... don't know if that made sense.
well it isn't really old vs. new. that's why that concept doesn't jump out. haha. maybe an envelope one each screen?... I dunno about the screens really.
I don't think the girls would appreciate barbies and such.
Anyways, I think maybe along with the wires, include more ways that two computers can connect. Like give both computers routers/modems, whatever, with antennas on them and have dotted lines connecting them to represent a wireless connection.
And give them both USB flash drives with dotted and arrowed lines? Same for CD's.
i like the simplicity as well but i agree with the comment about them "connecting" with various other things. i am thinking other electronic and portable type devices. maybe the computer or computers become the center of the whole piece and it become a "family tree" type of design with the computer being the "trunk" of the tree and the cords all sort of spread out and become the branches intermingling with each other and the other devices that can connect with computer.
I do like the idea of having some other computer-related electronic devices connected. I'm not a huge fan of how the cords connecting the two computers, though the cords on the tee-shirt don't quite match the ones on the larger design