Miss Betty Poo. I hope no one is offended.

This is a rough sketch of the general idea. Any thoughts?

Im thinking of having adding the title into the design... not sure.

If this offends you, maybe this will cheer you up: link ?

This is on a black shirt, so only 4 colors needed (white yellow orange and pink).

I always have a problem with designs in a cut off square.



The idea is very immature, but that's not always a bad thing.

Immature people love funny T-shirts.

The style is very rough and that's okay too, but the Bettie Boop silhouette looks odd in comparison.



Could you please give me opinions on this -



http://www.threadless.com/critique/56470/Henry_the_80_s



I really want to submit it, but I'm sure it could be better and if I don't take enough advice theres no way it will ever get printed.

Oh - and thanks for the advice on the spiral building design.