Sketched on a lark and urged to present to Threadless.

The concept is cute, but the art needs work. Consider cleaning up the lines a bit.

i concurr about cleaning up the line art, maybe making it vector art, but id wear it, its a solid concept

I'll do up the vector art this weekend... Thank you both for your input.

I liked the rough style of the line art, the sketched feel makes it seem less 'contrived' to me. Don't ask me why.

Aside from that it rocks. Totally a "drives it home" kinda image, nothing complicated about it, it just clicks.

I really like this.
Submit.

Please check out my babies and leave some comments -

http://www.threadless.com/critique/56470/Henry_the_80_s


http://www.threadless.com/critique/56462/G_raffes


http://www.threadless.com/critique/56466/Pope_rock_musical


http://www.threadless.com/critique/56574/Art_school

I hate it when all the graphic designers tell you to clean up your line work.
Don't do it.
We live here on threadless too. Damn them graphic designers.
They don't have souls.
This is awesome how it is and I agree with TheOubliette.
Bang bang.

If it looked vectory it would be boring and look like anyone could have done it.
This has style and a great simple concept

Thats actually really annoyed me.
Graphic designers ruin everything.
they give me nightmares

If you submit it in sketched version clean it up just a little bit. I like it in both version, vector or sketched. Maybe vector is too straight. Post both too see but I like the sketched because the concept is very clear.

Tell me what you think of mine please
http://www.threadless.com/critique/56541/iThink

Sketched on a lark and urged to present to Threadless.

Whats the difference between version 1 and 2?

All the reds are now 1 color, just to conform with submission guidelines... Decided against spending several hours trying to vector the whole thing out. ;)

So... I got a response that said it was declined due to an image error... What now? I don't know how/what I need to do to fix the problem if I don't know what the problem is...

So... this one is at 72 dpi... Third time is a charm, right?

Nice! Submit!

crit me? http://www.threadless.com/critique/56740/TEAm_work

So... frustrating... maybe as a .jpeg at 72 dpi?

i really like it...
would you crit me ?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/56754/fucking_rubick

very sweet-i like this-chek mine-thank you!!

:)

I love it. Can't wait to order a dozen. I think I will make it my new uniform.

this is genius! how did you come up with this. i would total buy this.

would you crit me back
http://www.threadless.com/critique/57102/Born_to_Travel

love it!!! Check out mine

http://www.threadless.com/critique/57133/balloons

I really like this, but I think it would maybe look better with cleaner lines for a more finished feel.
The messy thing works great too, though.
Critique me back?