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Ottorobba
Ottorobba on Nov 13 '09
I'm pretty sure there is no other reason to steal our cows. Everyone knows the song:


"Our milkshake brings all the greens to the yard".





Please let me know what you guys think, thanks :D
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BL1TZKRI3G
BL1TZKRI3G on Nov 15 '09
I assume you can't do some sort of scenery behind the whole thing, right? It'd look just weird, maybe...



I dunno, I don't like the blue all that much but I think it works a lot better than the cream one. Maybe grey/silver for the color of the shirt.



I like the little effect you did with the green ray, that's cool.



I know I'm picky, but that's just because I know ya ;)
BL1TZKRI3G
BL1TZKRI3G on Nov 15 '09
I assume you can't do some sort of scenery behind the whole thing, right? It'd look just weird, maybe...



I dunno, I don't like the blue all that much but I think it works a lot better than the cream one. Maybe grey/silver for the color of the shirt.



I like the little effect you did with the green ray, that's cool.



I know I'm picky, but that's just because I know ya ;)
Hindun
Hindun on Nov 15 '09
i think orange is good for the tee



comment me too PLease!!!



simple work of me



http://www.threadless.com/critique/56669/extra_terrestrial_smile



http://www.threadless.com/critique/56570/loveball
Ottorobba
Ottorobba on Nov 17 '09
Made a compilation of all shirts colors (except white), click on those links to open up the images (they are quite big). 1st link has grey-to-black, second has all the colors. Let me know which color setup you think works best for the t-shirt.



http://www.animex.com.br/grey.jpg

http://www.animex.com.br/color.jpg



Thanks for looking!
simcha123456
simcha123456 on Nov 17 '09
like this very much-chek mine when you have time thank you!! :)
Ottorobba
Ottorobba on Nov 18 '09
The general consensus so far with people is that it looks best on this dark blue. Any other critics and comments on the design? I know it needs work but I'd appreciate some pointers to what is wrong.
KirbyCow
KirbyCow on Nov 19 '09
Great expression on that poor cow! XD
dngai
dngai on Nov 19 '09
try using a different shape for the milkshake glass. And shadow always helps when placing graphic characters on tee shirt :)
Artboycat
Artboycat on Nov 19 '09
I would add more detail to all of the elements, shape the characters out to give them more personality, look at different styles reminiscent of yours and try to incorporate all of the strong points of those pieces onto yours



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sarahloraineishere
sarahloraineishere on Nov 19 '09
I'm liking the overall look of it but the one thing that really bothers me is the line work. On the alien and the ship you have a lot of different sizes and textures for the lines but on the cow the size of the line is very uniform. I think that if you were to go and tweak the line quality of the cow that would really help pull the design together.



Keep up the good work!



Please take a look at mine. ^^

http://www.threadless.com/critique/56985/Heimbeak_the_Wise
wistfulthinking
wistfulthinking on Nov 19 '09
I think placement is key on this, it might be a bit big now. However if you work in something really simple to represent the ground it might help.
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MariaSurducan
MariaSurducan on Nov 24 '09
Oh god, it took me sooo long to see the glass of milk... and I think it's because of the alien's hand -which I mistook for a plastic button. Maybe work on it a bit?

Please take a look at mine
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simcha123456
simcha123456 on Feb 04 '10
this is sweet! now check out : http://www.threadless.com/submission/253380/I_m_full_of_sign_s/showmore,designs

and dont forget to comment-thank you so much!
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