I don't know if the sandwich reads well yet, but that is supposed to be a knocked out ref.

oh, and, obviously, this is just the sketch phase.

Pretty creative :D id love to see it in "ready" phase



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yeah, i can't see the ref too well, and it takes up a large, prominent part of the image, taking up a lot of attention. maybe swap the sandwich for the juice box?



and Oh, i saw a guy wearing your Picket shirt the other day!

Thanks for the note. I haven't seen anyone besides my in-laws in any of my shirts yet :(



I'll mess with the composition and try to tell an even larger story.

New perspective with a lunchbox as the backdrop

Please don't mind the odd slant of the lunchbox.



I took a picture of my sketch because I don't have a scanner at home. The lines will run properly parallel in the final :D

I love the concept, i can't wait to see a vector rendition! This version seems to be easier to understand and in my oppinion, the lay out is a little bit more suited for a tshirt than the first one.

Thanks, I agree on all counts!

awesome idea. should look real spiffy when it's fully completed. can't wait to see the finished vers.



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"The Muse 3"

Fantastic concept and word-play. I'd like to see "Lunchadors" a bit clearer on the lunch box; I find myself thinking, "that D could totally be a P, and that wouldn't make any sense." Also while typing this, I realized that "Luchadores" has an e between the R and S. Also, having the ingredients facing the viewer adds a lot of activity to that side of the illustration, and it feels like it might get busy when converted to a colored illustration, but then again it might really help with the realism, 'cause detail like that is awesome. Sorry to be so nit-picky, but like I said I think this concept is completely awesome, and I cant wait to see where it goes.