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nice, please check
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I found this particularly challenging to reveal the cowboy, perhaps, let the letters actually touch each other, also, an adam's apple would be nice :)
Help me make mine better too! Throw a critique my way. Clack-Clack is my latest design! |
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I think if the letters touched each other,it will decrease the interesting of the composition,what do you think?
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..I suppose it would alter the composition to have touching numbers.. but I really do think an adam's apple would be a nice touch.. I guess I just wouldn't want someone to take as long to figure out a shirt that I was wearing as it took me to figure this one out, and that is why I feel it needs some tweeking... Although, it could be a benefit to describe in your first comment, what each part is, that way the viewer knows what to look for...
..Also, Version 4 of my critique Clack-Clack is up!! This is really getting close to where it should be, but I still need your help! Throw a critique my way. :) |