What would a modern day Alice do on a return from wonderland? I'm guessing probably keep her sunglasses on and drink through it...



This is my first design for Threadless so please give me feedback... be honest I can take it.



Not too sure on title/T-shirt colour...

really like the design and the detail thats gone into it, the idea that the more you look, the more you see.

colour choices for alice could maybe do with being slightly more washed out to really emphasise the contrast between wonderland and normality.

really like the concept behind it though and could possibly be part of a series of similar styles? xx

Yeah might try some different colours... just wanted her to stand out abit, reached the colour limit quite fast...

WOW. This is really nice.

I'd make the girl a little big bigger and maybe slightly to the right or left, with more of the design going upwards.

But - hey - what do I know - This is still very cool.

What would a modern day Alice do on a return from wonderland? I'm guessing probably keep her sunglasses on and drink through it...





This is my first design for Threadless so please give me feedback... be honest I can take it.





Not too sure on title/T-shirt colour...



Made the Alice slighlty larger and the pink abit brighter... any comments???

Hey I like the Idea for sure! Making Alice larger definitely helped.



I like the trip design but because it is so intricate it might be hard to print. Maybe try simplifying it or adding color. Right now it also just looks like its coming from behind her head not from her head.



also they might not accept it because of the alcohol. maybe try it with out or make it empty.



hope this helps. this is my first critique. just play and have fun with it!

Thanks for the comments mouse, wasn't too sure if it was abit too detailed for print myself so might work on that...



anybody know how much detail they allow on a tee?

I think they allow all the detail that you want. The thing is you need to simplify your design to make it better.

I like the idea, I like how you draw it, but you can improve it by simplify it.

Also, I think you should work (or even get rid of) the bottle...the liquid going out of it does not look fine to me.

Good luck!



Can you help me on my critique ?

With the bottle it could look like she is wasted.. maybe remove it as donlope01 said

Interesting. like the idea and the design. How about trying it on a light blue shirt, I think the colors would work well on that, plus it is a color associated with Alice.