Hi all!

This is my first contribution on thredless, thought Iīd try critique..

Printed with black ink on white t-shirt + glow-in-the-dark ink.

What do you say?

The stomach is created out of a halftone raster

Nice idea! Maybe slightly larger halftone... just looks abit grid like at the bottom?? but thats prob just me... god work.



Mind checking mine out?

Coming down from wonderland

I find it confusing, just from a standpoint of the placement on the shirt... it is anatomically in the right place? Not remembering the shape of the stomach, I wasn't sure what it was supposed to be. Maybe take a look at that.



Mine?

I thought about the halftone.. it's kind of hard illustrating it in such a small format.. I'll do another one where it's larger for sure!

I'll check out the stomach.. Maybe it should be placed a little bit lower..

Nice idea, but before reading your comment, I didn't see it was the stomach...maybe try to work on that



can you help me with my critique?

Hi all!


I remade the stomach.. and hope it looks more like one..?


Printed with black ink on white t-shirt + glow-in-the-dark ink.


What do you say?

ya this definetly looks a lot better than before :)

i like the concept.. but i think you should add some more color! not a lot but just enough to set a mood for the shirt. maybe make the bomb blue and make the stomach dark red :) i think that would make it much better!



can you help me out?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/56661/Watching_With_Wide_Eyes

Hey bro! nice design. nice tee, would like to wear it in a club. like the glowing bomb idea! take care!

I LOVE it! it's fucking nice!