I'm considering adding "Tour dates". . . think it would improve it or make it more cluttered?

Ugg I am so sick of hearing about this stupid disease, if a company put their name on it they would get so much advertising. In a more positive view this is the funniest thing ive seen done with it.

I'm considering adding "Tour dates". . . think it would improve it or make it more cluttered?

New version; "Tour Dates" added, along with shirt back design...are we even allowed to design a back?

Pretty sure you're allowed to have a back: there's at least one tee on here that has a back, but I can't find it now and I should be studying.

I think ^ is correct. I like the idea. Maybe have a commercial for the next event (the tuna flu coming soon)?



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link?

Hey Tim! We are mos def allowed backs. Love the design. Am trying to think of useful criticism, but it's already rad.

Tim! amaazing!

Ya Ya Ya Ya!!! This is great!!! I say it's ready!!

Critique my design?

This is AWESOME. Submit it!!



Only thing I would say is check to make sure your dates area accurate. (I am too lazy to confirm any of this, so if you already did, sorry!)

I don't have any suggestions. I think this is pretty great.

Typos and alignments fixed...



Biohazard symbol or no?

I love it with the biohazard symbol!

Love the biohazard symbol. Definitely keep it. Is this based on fact? If so, props.



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Maybe add an evil pig on the front, between "The" and "Flu" and behind "Swine"

This is an awesome idea. I love the biohazard symbol. The only complaint I have is it's kin of bland on the front, most bands would have more of a design? The pig is a great idea- lower down the ribbon and have an evil pig.



I love this idea, needs a bit of work though. I might even buy this shirt when it's done.

Don't listen to everyone else. Don't over complicate.. This is fine..

Nice and subtle.

Blends in well with all of the other band tour tees.

I like this very much.^^

Maybe the H1N1 can add some texture in it,and the ribbon text can be different with the ribbon's outline.

By the way,have you try out some color with the ribbon?



Would you checj out mine?Thanks a lot

http://www.threadless.com/critique/55912/Smoker_sVictim



http://www.threadless.com/critique/56186/That_s_Why_Ideas_Never_Run_Out



http://www.threadless.com/critique/56450/Cowboy_Count_to_Ten



http://www.threadless.com/critique/56457/Colour_Fool

@ general comments, yes the dates are real...or at least, they're real if you can trust Wikipedia on such things... ;)



I'd like to keep the front simple, but maybe a more original symbol for the background...something that actually combines swine and flu...I'll see what I can do.

good idea but I think here the jury won't like it. You should sell this on snorgtees ...!

You should take out the list and the biohazard sign, less is more.

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Oh wow! I love this idea!



I think you should play around with the colours and type a bit more, I like where you going with the pink type but the hand drawn font for "swine flu" doesn't mesh well with the rest of the stencil font. I think you should stick with just one.



I want this shirt! Good Luck!



Check out my design:

When Patterns Attack

I'm liking it! But I don't think the sketched look of the ribbon and text is fitting in well. I'd go whole hog (pardon the pun) and do a slick version that reflects some of the 'dramatic' graphics bands use.

New logo, plus a bit o' fanciness. Whatcha think? Ready to submit?

i like it maby the whole world needs to see it



thanks for the input

I like this, I think that the H1Ni and Swine Flu Logo could use a little polishing, just making them smoother and not so rough, seeing as everything else on your design is so smooth. I like you your stuff though. Good job.



If you have time

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Good idea. I like the font used for H1N1. And I like the biohazard symbol behind the list.

I think the circled symbol on the front maybe should be a little smaller and moved over to the side instead of circling the belly button. :)

The ribbon and text on it seems too rough. Smooth it out and I think it will look a lot better.

Nice work.

Thanks for commenting on mine.

Pretty much final version...glow was removed; I want a "dirty" feel to the front of the tee. Little circle thing didn't work out. This is a lot more like v.3

Like your concept. I think you could give submitting a try. Only thing I might reconsider is the banner on the front, maybe less sketchy? But that's really personal I guess.



If you have some time left, please comment my Contrast Cat? Thanks!

Nice concept, not much more you can do about it (maybe making the banner smooth and not pencil-like, but I guess you like it that way). So... Submit it!



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Cat's Nightmare

Thanks!

Okay, it's submitted. Assuming it's approved, you can go score it here!

Hmmm...It appears I have been rejected. Now I'm just confused. When they reject your design, is it generally because there's something wrong with the presentation format or they just don't like it?

They tell you in the email generally why it was rejected... I'm not sure if the "we think the design needs more work" reason they give actually means "we hate it"... Still trying to understand myself.

This one:

Cat's Nightmare, updated!



got reject, but I'm not giving up on it yet.