Color of hair still TBD, as well as whether the shirt/suspenders will have color.

I like the artwork and style of it! I'm not sure why the smaller girl is down below the same girl above though, I think I would like it better without her. Finish off the hand on the top chick too and I think it's great. Check out what other people have to say about it, because I'm not really sure what else to recommend :]





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It's kind of like a paradox in a way, the water leaking out of her boot, then turning to fish, then back to her... kicking more water lol, dunno if that helps

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I get the paradox, but I still believe it would look better without the bottom girl. Maybe if you found a way to change the fish back into water, it would make more sense. But I like your style, this design could really go somewhere.

I like your idea but it might take too much explaining the way the design is right now. Perhaps the water / fish could go in more of a complete circle back onto the same girl? I'd say color in the shirt, suspenders and hair too.

Thanks for the comments guys, I also think that maybe the colors should be less bright more dull does that seem the right thing to do?

very dr. seuss looking! i think perhaps the girl should have legs. i get why the girl is there. the directional flow leads to something... maybe the girl up top could go away... or maybe not. just worth considering.