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ScheherazadeComplex
ScheherazadeComplex on Nov 07 '09
Color of hair still TBD, as well as whether the shirt/suspenders will have color.
lizsmithson
lizsmithson on Nov 08 '09
I like the artwork and style of it! I'm not sure why the smaller girl is down below the same girl above though, I think I would like it better without her. Finish off the hand on the top chick too and I think it's great. Check out what other people have to say about it, because I'm not really sure what else to recommend :]





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ScheherazadeComplex
ScheherazadeComplex on Nov 08 '09
It's kind of like a paradox in a way, the water leaking out of her boot, then turning to fish, then back to her... kicking more water lol, dunno if that helps
ScheherazadeComplex
ScheherazadeComplex on Nov 08 '09
bump for feedback.
Fotologica
Fotologica on Nov 08 '09
I get the paradox, but I still believe it would look better without the bottom girl. Maybe if you found a way to change the fish back into water, it would make more sense. But I like your style, this design could really go somewhere.
sethmcomber
sethmcomber on Nov 08 '09
I like your idea but it might take too much explaining the way the design is right now. Perhaps the water / fish could go in more of a complete circle back onto the same girl? I'd say color in the shirt, suspenders and hair too.
ScheherazadeComplex
ScheherazadeComplex on Nov 08 '09
Thanks for the comments guys, I also think that maybe the colors should be less bright more dull does that seem the right thing to do?
dannodepf
dannodepf on Nov 08 '09
very dr. seuss looking! i think perhaps the girl should have legs. i get why the girl is there. the directional flow leads to something... maybe the girl up top could go away... or maybe not. just worth considering.
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