When traveling the friendly skies, beware the Hot Arrr Balloon...

HAHAHAHA - so awesome.

I think it's pretty much perfect - just needs to be bigger in the tee.

Could you critique my latest design ?

Back again. Assuming this is vector - maybe the pirate balloon should be the larger one ?

This is great. Maybe overlap the balloons so the blue one is clearly in front with the pirate balloon coming from behind. Might look better on a lighter blue - or maybe change the blue balloon to another color.

Take a look at mine?

Good suggestion SethmComber -Actually had the pirate balloon closer behind it teh first time ...maybe ill revisit it.

As for the color of teh balloon -im currently using the T-Shirt color as my 9th color -so I'm kinda committed to a blue shirt. Maybe Ill try a couple more versions with different blues... also going upload another comp with teh design on a shirt.

When traveling the friendly skies, beware the Hot Arrr Balloon... V2 comped.

V1 actually shows teh entire design better!

This is great...cool design. Balloons are well done. Love the cannon! I think the only thing that bothers me is the cannonball. I think it would look better moved one way or the other, not smack dab in the middle between the balloons....Just a thought.

I like it. Maybe move the cannon ball, just a little, but it's not a big issue.

Agree...i would move the canonball close the pirate ballon and draw a movement lines.
Very nice work...so funny.

Pliz..some feedback of:
Upgrading the 6th fleet
and
Errr...we..have a...problem here
are welcome. Thanks.

haha thats great, definatley make your design more dominate when you submit and just to be nit-pickety it looks like you jave a slight perspective issue where the 2 balloons are touching, try moving them closer or farther apart.

oh and if you want to crit mine:
http://www.threadless.com/critique/56308/Socks_and_clocks

haha this is a great pun, love it (agree with the cannonball comment)

heres my design:
http://www.threadless.com/critique/55797/dark_sun_god

Love the idea!! Maybe have a trail of one or two smaller balls being blown out of the cannon and one very large cannon ball closest to the other balloon. Great work on the balloons.
Working on a design and needing comments. Not sure where I am going with it. If you have time can you give it a look. Thanks
Space Travel

Sweet concept, but there are two things i would change.
One, make the canonball idea more prominent, it's funny!
and two the pirate coat of arms would look better if it was consistent with the balloon's edges. The rest is fantastic, I would buy it.
Check out my design Somethings's Fishy and let me know what you think. Thanks

I like the balloons placement. It'll work with the wearer's contours if a girl wears it. Roll with it as is!

Nice idea. Could be even cooler though. Seems to me the cannon should be aimed at the "pop-able" part of the balloon. Also, it's hard to tell what's going on at first, so maybe the cannon ball gets bigger with some more motion lines or some billowing smoke—something. This is also super fussy, but the placement of the clouds bothers me, doesn't feel random enough because they're too evenly spaced... Good luck.

Check out my crit if you have time:

When traveling the friendly skies, beware the Hot Arrr Balloon... A new version that I submitted

its been done

Nice. I like the idea, and I'm a sucker for a Jolly Rodger!

I feel that the clouds let this down a little though. They just look a little at odds with the rest of the illustration, personally I think they're too flat.

if it's been done, you should put up a link, Hildy.
I've not seen it, and think it's great, very nice execution too. This'll score well. Sub sub.

And if you get a moment, to come and comment/vote on my latest, I would greatly appreciated.

Amongst The Pigeons

yeah def put up a link... I havent seen it either (obviously)

That's just fantastic. This looks ready to sub, I think.

I especially love that the basket is black.

If anyone has a chance...?
November Equation

Awesome! Nice clean design - I really like it - Sub it!

If anyone can offer advice on mine :)
Wrestling with Recession

I really like the idea!!This make me laugh!haha!Sub it!!!

Please check out mine,would you?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/55912/Smoker_sVictim

http://www.threadless.com/critique/56186/That_s_Why_Ideas_Never_Run_Out

http://www.threadless.com/critique/56450/Cowboy_Count_to_Ten

http://www.threadless.com/critique/56457/Colour_Fool