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v1 Sad Apple, current version








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rufous
rufous on Nov 07 '09
No wordplay, just an empathic apple core.
51 days later
aleshas3
aleshas3 on Dec 28 '09
I like this...

do you mind checking out my critique area...have a print I have a print I have been working on for a few days, would like to see what you think.
bt_cruiser02
   bt_cruiser02 on Dec 28 '09
I think this could be good but it could use some cleaning up. the edges look pretty rough. Was that intentional? It might be funny to see a bunch of fruits that had been eating that look sad too. Like an orange with a frowning face cut out of the peel.



Could you take a look at my design and let me know what you think:

Neverending Flight
13 days later
the daddy
the daddy on Jan 11 '10
I think this very good, maybe a lighter shirt?



Please look at my first design

http://www.threadless.com/critique/59801/the_dogs
Megless
Megless on Jan 11 '10
I agree that the edges need cleaning up a bit but apart from that I really like it. The emotion in the eyes is brilliant.



I’ve updated my design, please tell me what you think
13 days later
Randomly Greek
Randomly Greek on Jan 24 '10
I love the idea! Just needs a bit of a touchup on photoshop or something, make it a little edgier, smooth the outsides. c:



Can you help me out too? I'm a little bit in a slump!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/60708/Velociraptor_Word_Play
137 days later
Andreasevermyr
Andreasevermyr on Jun 11 '10
An apple a day keeps the doctor away...
http://www.threadless.com/critique/69805/Certain_death
240 days later
gustirandy
gustirandy on Feb 07 '11
Good Job !
pijaczaj
pijaczaj on Feb 07 '11
maybe a scary looking shadow of kid on background would make it more interesting but than apple must be eaten only in half.
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richmond19
richmond19 on Mar 11 '11
fix up some lines and sharpen the bury parts, otherwise, i'd wear it


check mine out?
Mela91
Mela91 on Mar 12 '11
aw poor thing. This looks cool but u could honestly scetch the sad apple better or atleast clean it up in photoshop. overall good job.

Could u pls give me some feedback?http://www.threadless.com/critique/85944/In_the_eye_of_the_beholder
381 days later
Nik Tak
Nik Tak on Mar 27 '12
nid to more work for ur design, is too simple

feel free to check mine
http://www.threadless.com/critique/101411/Burning_Night
thanks
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