A night at the shell-less club.

i LOVE this. This is one of the first designs that I've been like "Wow...that's really clever" Round off the stage a little bit, and I'm not sure you need the outline on the snail-trails, but I like it otherwise!

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A night at the shell-less club.

*new version* I got rid of the outline around the slime and rounded out the edge of the stage. Thanks for your critiques.

ahaha! i like. maybe work on the bottom border

A night at the shell-less club.

*edit* Changed the table

THAT LOOKS SO MUCH BETTER. I wasn't really sure of what to say about the table, but you got it right. It looks really good.
I think this shirt is hilarious. Submit if you don't get any other criticisms of it.

That's funny and slimy and gross all at the same time! :) Well done. I agree that this table looks so much better.

That's funny and slimy and gross all at the same time! :) Well done. I agree that this table looks so much better.

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lol awsome, maybe shrink placement and tone down the blackoutlines?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/55797/dark_sun_god

I agree with ^. I would also try adding more background detail.
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This shirt is so funny! Submit this.
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Very funny! I agree I would love to see more slugs having fun in the background. The dancer slug has a smile on her face what about a smile on the patron slug? Wonderful idea.
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I like that the boy slug has wonderment in his eyes instead of a smile and I like the placement just where it is...but wait to see if i'm outnumbered by many I guess before listening to me because I may be the odd one out.

Actually, the slug isn't smiling. That's her antenna thing.

good idea...not great colors...

Love it!

A night at the shell-less club.

I could probably edit this design forever, but I'm pretty happy with how it looks now. I like the simplicity of it as it is. What color shirt do you think it would look best on. I personally like both of these greens.

I like the lighter green.

Looks good. I do think some minor changes will make it even better.

I agree with toning down the outline.

The slug'a antenna and eyes don't quite match up in placement. I think her right eye needs to be moved up on her head a little bit so it looks more like she is looking at the guy rather than the shirt viewer.

I'd put a darker color on the table. Seems a bit too bright and cartoonish for a strip club.

It would be fun with a bright light source somewhere so you could have some strong shadows and highlights .... but don't know, may not add much to the design.

I would go for brown or sand or the lighter greenish colour you have here. Stick with something very earth-toned to accent the snails. This design is great - you're more than ready to submit.

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Oops, one tiny thing I changed that is not in this sample is the slug's lower left tentacle. It will be slightly thinner and slightly longer (very slightly).

I just realized that I didn't count the black outline as a color. That means I have one too many colors. Crap...

Try using the brown from his shell as the stain on the stage or vice versa?

Better yet, since the shell is next to the stain, use the stain colour for her spots.

I agree, I think you should use the slime on the stage for her spots.

This is money! Soon as you figure out the colours, submit it!

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btw definitely the lighter green...

How making the stage mirrored so it looks more strip bar-y and you can just ust the same colours again? I prefer the light green version I think. Love the design.... didnt realise that snails found slugs sexy until now hmmm....

A night at the shell-less club.

It seems more people liked the light green shirt background. What do you think of this dark green?

Ah yeah, I'm liking this now. Definitely prefer the darker green here. Very sexy.

Oooh! Yeah, I like that, too.

BTW, this shirt kinda reminds me of a video ... I think it's their eyes.

Don't ask how I found this video.

Or why it was ever made.


Geesh, okay, here's the link anyway, haha. (You have to wait till 1:07 before seeing the creature eyes.)
Creepy video that probably no one should watch

Whoa, epic html link failure .... try this one instead.

Creepy video that probably no one should watch

Nothing really new this time. Getting it ready to submit.

I edited the outlines a bit.

I'm just seeing this for the first time. I think you've made great progress from the original version. I like it a lot. I think the spots on the "dancer" are a nice touch. And I totally agree on the shirt color.

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