This is a little bit of a rework of a design of mine. Trying to fit it on the front of a shirt and see how it works.

i like it :) good concept! i'd submit right now :D





help me out too? :)

Real vampires don't sparkle

I love this. Submit. Sorry this is so short. But I have nothing to add.



Critique Ours?

The Tooth Fairy: What Really Happened To Your Baby Teeth

Awesome - should the toothpaste creature have some highlights like the tube ?





Could you critique my latest design ?

Love it! The curve in the toothpaste in the creature's neck looks a bit odd - it doesn't quite match the swirly curves of the rest of the toothpaste. Maybe have it double back on itself once more. I agree that highlights on the creature and paste might work too. These colors work well.



Take a look at mine?

Thanks for the input. The odd bit at the neck area was probably because the original design went over the shoulder at that point. I'll have to fix it. I like the idea of making it double back one more time.

Good catch.

Fun idea and style. Think it's ready.



Crit mine if you have time:

Flying Forest

Thanks

hahaha! That would be a cool effect. Perhaps I'll consider that after I fix a few other things.

that blue circle in his mouth is really bugging me, maybe coloring that it to match the grey of his mouth :) then it will be perfect!

submit submit! I really really like it!

Could you please please take a look at mine

ok iamalaayy: I'll fix that for you. ;)

nooooo, I love his little tongue :P

If you want to go nitpicking, fix the contour line so that it's relatively equal all the way around. That is, if you have a lot of time on your hands....

The other part I have never been 100% sure on was the "and Spit!" part. Does it make sense? Is is funny? Is it offensive? Should it be some other 2 to 3 word thing? anything?

Very cool hahaha! Love the monster's face!! One thing I would add though, is the rest of the tube of the toothpaste, going to the side of the shirt?? That's it for me, then it's ready to go!! Really cool idea!!



Would be so kind to take a look at my design as well?? I'd appreciate it !!

Did some minor edits and reworked in an additional twist of the toothpaste. I thought about changing out the "and Spit" for "Hello" so I included that speech bubble down in the left hand corner.

"Hello" is awesome, I'm definitely missing the joke with the "and spit" but it's a pretty sick shirt even when it doesn't make any sense

yeah use hello..great idea





please critique mine

Skater From Grave

I agree, I'd like to see it with hello



Please critique my design "Antelope, Cantelope"

I think all good, submit it =)

Check my Sadness

I had a feeling I should have just gone with "Hello" for this version to see how it worked. I'll try and swap it out for the next version.



I probably need to make the chunky white fade happening on the tube be more obvious on the mock up because it is pretty chunky in my file.

haha, it's very funny... i like it...

du you want to take a look at my design...

http://www.threadless.com/critique/58131/FastBeetle

Updated with "Hello" as the main speech bubble. Did a few minor edit to the rest of it and fixed the halftone fade on the Tube.

lol cute :) i say submit it :)



please critique my design?

i like it! the only thing that bothers me is that the black lines on the letters abruptly stop in the halftone gradient. perhaps if you did a similar effect to the black lines so it will fade away with the white better.

I personally liked the "and spit" better, it's a lot less random than "hello." How about "don't swallow"? I pretty sure it's universally known that it's bad to swallow toothpaste.

I think I'll stick with "hello"

looks good! how bout 'mmmmintyyy!!' in the speech bubble?

^ Hihihi, 'mmmmintyyy!!' ?



Whatever the text, this is a nice drawing and concept.

I like it.

This is great! Good work! I say submit this!



And while you're at it, critique my design? :)

http://www.threadless.com/critique/58303/The_Art_of_Organics

haha...awesome design...like the placement and feel of it. Submit this.



also what do u think of mine



http://www.threadless.com/critique/58300/cat_errrrr_pillar

I'm think I might just call this one done. Unless there is more feedback...

hihi funny, i like it., i agree the 'and spit' or 'downt swallow' gives it that little bit more than 'hello'



Would love to hear your comment on my Skully Hearts design, Thanks!

Hey if you stick with "hello," you wouldn't mind if made a toothpaste related design with the "...and spit, don't swallow" innuendo, would yah?



The kids love all things sex related.

I probably would but I can't stop you.

hahaha pretty cute



could you critique mine?

Changed the Presentation to include both text options.

Nice. You could even have it saying 'smile' or 'open wide'?



If you have time I'd really appreciate a vote on my collab with sonmi

Good luck with it :)