This is very rough. I just finished drawing this and thought it would look cool on a t-shirt. Please make comments on if colors should be added, how big the lines should be, etc. Thanks. I always like feedback.

Cool, but I think it needs something more, a payoff. I don't know, maybe one of the shapes is one of those M.C. Escher-esque impossible objects in the corner and it's bright yellow or something. Good luck!

Crit mine if you have time:
Flying Forest

Here i added color with two layers, one on top of the other. I added to the top layer a drop shadow to add to this affect. Please, comments and criticism is greatly encouraged!!!! Thanks.

It's quite coo,, and will sure draw much attention. Personally I don't like the shade in the middle, but since there's no version without it I can't tell if it's really worse than not having any shade. Anyways, How will this be printed?! Is it possible on threadless?

Cat's Nightmare, V2 needs comments and critique votes

Woah! So simple, but so awesome. I would buy it.

I'm wondering if it would look better or worse with darker shading for each shape, though. I can't tell.

Best of luck though!

Help me?

thanks guys!! I could try a version maybe without the shadow.

Hm, I like both versions. But the newest is really nice.

I really like it, its very simple. I would move the cut off model's head to the top of the page before you submit.

crit me?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/56308/Socks_and_clocks

i think it would be cool it the blocks had some shading. i really like it though!

Here I lessened the cast shadow. What do you guys think?? Better or worse??

Dude I actually like this.. I have no advice I really like thisan great job!!! Good luck

I actually really like the first version...it looks crazy and 3d, like you're actually wearing a wierd spiky shirt. Personally I find the mat colours kill that effect; they remind you that it's a 2-d design on a shirt

Schweet! Very cool. Yeah I definitely like it better with the lessened shadow.

I'm going to be mr. Retro here and say that I kinda like the first one, mainly because it is in black & white and it gives the eye something to follow without being overwhelming. Maybe if you put in some more linework into it, maybe some crosshatching and classic pen & ink techniques.
When I look at the red and blue one, I instantly think of spiderman.

I hope that helps.

Thanks for the crit on mine, btw. :)

Im gonna join the bandwagon and say I like version 1 also. But I also think you should color like 4 or 5 blocks on version one--like primary colors--red, blue, yellow.

hope this helps!:)

I liked the shading in v2... just to confuse community preference even more. (But really, I did.) ;)

I don't know if the 2 colour version is even possible?
I like the 1 colour verson best.

Well, I for one love the two color version. I think it adds a whole lot more visual interest. I don't think the black and white one wouldn't do very well in the voting.

Best of luck with this!

I really like the coloured versiont! The black and white one felt a little empty to me, and the colour definitely added something to it . :) And I also like the lessened shadow.

That being said though, you could always try half white, half colour, and then that might close a gap between the people who love the colour, and people who love the white? Just an idea though!

Best of luck with it! and thanks for the crit on mine :D

This version is pretty awesome. I feel like it could use something, but I have no idea what changes could be made.

Definitely better with the smaller shadow. I think this is my favourite version too, I like V1 as well but think this is a stronger proposition.

Good luck.

I think I prefer the first version... I think you lose something of the design with the colour?? cool though.

Try coloring only some, I kinda want to see how it would look like.

I also thought INSTANTLY Spiderman. It's sad when cool color schemes get "taken."

Well...seeing the evolution of this design think that adding color you get more visual impact but losing the fresh sensations of the first version.

Uuuuhm maybe you might hold the power of color and perhaps even greater impact if you let some of the pieces, randomly selected, in white.

Try it..i think you can get a good result.

I'm not sure I like the colour version, think I prefer the white. What about a dark grey on black tee?

This could look insane in a glow version - I think I'd walk around in darkness all the time :P

If anyone gets a chance, give mine a crit. Any feedback appreciated.
http://www.threadless.com/critique/56449/Tourist

The flat color definitely kills the shirt. What if you added shading to make it pop more? Not a color drastically different that the non-shaded parts, but just enough to suggest some 3-D-edness.

So should I go half white half some other color?? Or should I work with the first version a little more??

The first one looks like some kinda crazy Pokemon costume or something. I like both the colored ones...The first one has the strongest illusion.
I like shirts like this but do they ever do good in the ratings?
Seems like virtually every shirt in the store has some kind of humor.

Maybe if you shade some of the shards it will look more 3D? Just light shading though.

man this is cool-grate idea!!!! chek mine uot when you have time-thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:)!

I think it's cool but the first version was also good enough for submissio if you'd ask me!

I made the left side white. What do u guys think?? Better or worse???

Actually you made the right side white :)
I think this is the best yet, but still worry about how will it be printed?
If this cant be printed, I'd go for a belt-print (using right terminology here? I'm new to shirt-printing) of the B&W version, after you shaded the blocks to look more 3D.

I hope you find find the right way between all the different opinions! Just remember that it means it's really liked by us people :)

Oh, and please check out my latest Cat's Nightmare...
Thanks!

hello?? comments anyone?

HELLO??? Any Suggestions???

I like ur last version very much I think it's ready to submit, but here's another suggestion:

try to overlap the areas of the red and the white, to get what I have in mind imagine that u have a white hand and a red hand, now put ur hands together like u're playing mercy...got it;) but don't overlap too much though

http://www.threadless.com/profile/1103080/dimensionfifth
Check out my critiques and slogans; vote for the ones u like coz I feel like I'm getting a lot of unfair votes

Anything else???

Regardless of the colors ... it's wonderful idea

but I'll score 5 if you chose red & white

your saggustions is accepted for my critiques:

http://www.threadless.com/profile/1118416/Abdulla_Habib/critiques

So should I work on it some more, or send it in????