I want this to go in the Travel contest. I like the 60's feel to it. Let me know what you think!

Working with this Idea. I think I have it going in the right direction. Still needs work. Give me some help if you have time.

Thanks

You really shouldnt copy and paste/ mirror or rotate anything is a design, It makes it look like you were to lazy to draw it out as something else.

I would like to see the robots do something other than just float there, right now its does not says robots travelling. Maybe they need a ship or jetpack or something?

This design is in the beginning stages. I agree they need to be individuals. I’m just working out the visuals.

Thanks for the input

the robots are nice, i agree with jmg14, give the robots a bit speed. and make them individual

Thanks flify flow! I am working on the robots and giving them more personality. I have some ideas just need to make them work.

Thanks

I agree a better sense of movement would be nice - maybe have the robots and saucers all coming in from the same direction, like in a wide arc from the bottom of the design up toward Earth. If you want to use the type I might suggest hand-drawing it so it has an authentic feel.

Still working on it.

Thanks for your help. I agree the earth should be green. I will take a look!

i agree with JanDeA .but its cool.

plz check mine http://www.threadless.com/profile/997187/b12345/critiques

Thanks for all your help. Here is the green earth. I am still thinking things through on this design. Any help would be appreciated!

Submit it but how is placement?

Thanks YaaH!

I am still working on placement. Just not sure what I want to do.

Took the font out and change the direction of one of the ships added another black hole and some shooting stars

This has come a loooooong way from V1 !!! It's really cute and I think it's ready for submission

I liked the frame but was not working for the placement. Here it is without the frame.

Here is placement. Thanks

WAY changed from original, but cool

New Shirt Color.

Neat idea. I think I like it better without the framing. It seems more space-like without it. keep it up! if you get a second to check mine out I'd really appreciate it.



http://www.threadless.com/critique/56170/yeah_I_have_backup

Thanks I will take the border off. I will try to add some more shadows. I am always afraid of adding too many colors. I will give your work a look and thank you both very much for your help!!!

Her it is without any background. I am going to do it on black as well.

Here it is without the background in black. I like this one. Help me out.

Thanks

I think the black tee looked way better... It would be really cool to incorporate some foil or glow ink into this design, too. Maybe spread the characters and objects out a little more across the tee (width-wise). It's lookin nice!



Please help me improve one of mine?

Hey this looks like a completed design now...

That moon-mass or whatever on the bottom is bothersome.

And put more stars, the design is making to much of a bounding box looking design. There's more space on the shirt to allow for spacing...

Heh. Spacing.

Yeah, get rid of the moon, but the rest looks good. I like the overall shape of what you've done. More stars would look good, but I'm not sure they're necessary. See how it looks.





Crit mine please?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/47605/cola#v5

Ok I will give it a go. Is late tonight but thanks for all of the help. Will work on it. Thanks everyone for sharing your wisdom!

Submit it ;D

Trying to expand it out of the framed version.

Trying to get away from the framed look.

change you tee template to something more appealing, just go to flickr and type in threadless shirts and youll gett a good one for sure :) as for your design, i really like it :) nice work





critique me? :D

Definitely better getting out of that box.

How many colors is that?

Looked over it and did have too many colors I am resubmitting it. Should have eight in next submission. Thanks for the update. Thanks as well for the info about t-shirts on flickr. I will take a look.

Changed a few things should only have eight colors now.

Should only have eight colors now

For some reason it is not uploading new image. Hope this works.

And I thought I was having trouble...

Here is the final I am going to enter it in the travel contest. We will see what happens. I want to get started on some of the other contests. Thanks for all of your help!!

The background color had changed so I changed it back. Going to enter it. See if they submit it.

Thanks Everyone again.

Try putting it on an actual photo of a shirt and seeing how that looks.

I don't really think theres much more that can be done to improve this.

Would you please critique mine?

Coup d'Ear

Thanks. I did submit it because the Travel contest ends soon. Thanks for your help. Had problems with the real shirt finding one I liked. Love your work!

this is sweet

Greatt looking piece!



This is my Critique!