Looking to submit this for the Travel II theme. But, I wanted to get some feedback first. Thank you for your time. :)

i like the escenario, I guess ill add some madness or sillyness going in that place. just maybe

definetly a good idea for the travel theme :) but i feel like it's missing something to give it that extra mile.... i think if you

added some stars and some astroids it would look amazing!

hope i could help :)





your opinion is needed here: (always appreciated)

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I love the colors :) I agree with Elyison, some stars or something would make it better, just don't over due it.



Could you check mine out

http://www.threadless.com/critique/56101/Pirate_Bear_vs_Ninja

Thanks for the feedback, appreciate it. Is this better?

:) Thanks for the feedback. :) Here is another version of adding the stars.



Which do you think is better v3 or v4? Do you think either are ready for submission?



Thanks for your help. :)

Just a couple of very small tweaks on v4. :)

i like it... but maybe make the moon bigger..... like its the biggest moon you've ever seen coming up over the horizon and have just the big moon part with highlights of the ship and the exhaust trail glow so you have the silhouette of the rocket black against the glowing moon...

it just seems like the rocket should be going to a more fantastic place than just the little moon you have there... space is BIG... let us think the rocket is going somewhere fantastic, and let the contrast between small rocket and huge moon speak the loudest...

bring the position of the design a lot lower, the way it is now, it seem like space is so closed and small instead of inmense

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please

Thanks again. Is this what you guys meant?

Sorry, had to do one more tweak. I didn't like the halo around the moon. I think this way makes the moon pop more.

awesome, will this be on kids clothes too? i'd love this one for my daughter:)

--funny note, watching a movie about the moon landing as i look at this, whoa!

Very cool design! I only wonder what it will look like if the room is totally dark and the glow is all you see, will the space ship be visible? Keep up the good work!





Critique my Dark blue magic ? Thanks!

Hehe. Sorry, I didn't do a good job with the look in the dark.

very nice, like the effects of the stars and the rocket thrust.

think it's ready to sub.



have a look at this?

I think this design is beautiful, You got my vote!

Im a noob to this site and Im hoping some people will come critque my work and going to another more popular entry to ask for help seemed to be a good idea.

heres the link:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/56031/Rock_em_Sock_em_Heartless



thanks all and good luck helldozer

This is great! I'd try to round out and extend the bottom of the blast-off smoke so it looks a little more like a planet. Otherwise I think you're good to go!



Critique my new one?

The Death of Analog

I think its ready.

better than #5 for sure... will the rocket be a silhouette? I think the moon should still be a bit bigger and lower but... thats me = )

I'd wear it for sure... sub it... or tweak it, either way I support your decision...

I think this is perfect the way it is! I say subtmit it so I can give it a 5 and buy one =)!!!! Good luck =)!!!



Would you be kind enough to critique my work as well? Fire in the hole! Thanks a lot =D!!

Yeah, this is looking good.

Thanks for the positive feedback, it's very much appreciated. :)

Thanks all. This is up for scoring. :)



To The Moon

Amazing! I love how the fire(?) coming out of the rocket is white so it's almost as if it's moonlight. Very beautiful. Would love to know what it looks like in the dark :)

Hopefully this gives a better idea of what it will look like glowing. :)

nicely done! :)

whaoh that's awesome! that has serious potential to be printed. You have obviously given this design a lot of thought because of all the versions. I think it's ready to submit for sure!

I've changed my design a bit: Atomic Playdate

Sweet design! Looks like a winner

Thanks, appreciate it. I did sub it for design. But, i'm guessing it didn't get picked. I don't know how it works. The score I got was ok I think.



The scored design is here.

love it!! :D ready for submit :3



check mine please??

thanks!

I was looking through shirts to see the scores and I've seen designs with under a 3 that have been printed.

i guess u like rockets :D but i like this ;)

Hi - the tee is cool - I like all the adjustments you made with the exception of making the moon bigger - I'd shrink it to the original size but keep everything else as is - good luck

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great illustration!

SUBMIT!

CRITIQUE illuminated PLEASE!!

Nice I think you should submit. 5$

Give me a Vote, if you have a sec.

A very good job