To all the broken hearted...

please help me to undestand what's wrong... ;___;

what is the idea behind it supposed to be, if you can explain that we can help to further develop your design

Is that a piece that fell of the heart puzzle?

What is the message, I know broken heart but what about it?

I was so late for dibs sorry.

Nice design of the heart. I think designs look better on a photo rather then on a template. I think that this is missing some details. Its a bit too plain at the moment. Nice start though. Keep it up.

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I think you could play more with those shapes, make it a little bit more complex

To all the broken hearted...

For me, it seems to empty. Add more cracks maybe. Color too. Just like different hue of red tho. Cool idea. ^u^



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Like the heart but the branch seems too big, stark, disconnected. Either treat same as heart or do just the heart on it's own - more impact. Comment me plz

http://www.threadless.com/critique/55781/walk_rock

I would lower the heart and maybe connect it to the branch somewhere up top. Also maybe add a little bit of color. But it looks awesome :)



Could you check mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/56101/Pirate_Bear_vs_Ninja

i wouldn't move the heart at all.



maybe give more work to the branch it is pretty simple now..

for who asked abour the message:



I was thinkin about when u got broken hearted and u feel like u want to protect yourself from other possible wounds and then u obtain to isolate ur heart with many layers of bramble...



...somethin like that ^^'

You could throw in some other element symbolizing those possible wounds (what would that be?). I also find interesting that you say "many layers of bramble", you could develope further that layers concept.

Just some thoughts, I hope they help you.

Best of luck!

Try it in more natural colours to emphasise the "bramble" aspect of it.



I assume the big bramble at the bottom is supposed to have been a piece removed from the heart, correct? If so, try making the piece you took it from really big and obvious where it's missing, so it looks like if you flipped it around it would fit right back in there.



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I like it! but i agree make the branche smaller.