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ArizonaCouture
ArizonaCouture on Nov 03 '09
Pesky Postal Workers Getting In The Way!!! 5 Colors on White or Cream. Positive Feedback!! ^^
Ramzii
Ramzii on Nov 04 '09
hey thanks for the font site, i only knew dafont.com

cool t shirt, i would be a little bit more creative with the words

and the used font is kinda hard to read.. i would go for "Journal", "Angelina" or "Christopherhand" font.
urban createur
urban createur on Nov 04 '09
Thanks for your comment. I absolutely love your slogan...I can relate to it!

This idea is great its just that everything is placed in the center. I would like to see some commotion here as it feels like that the heart is in conflict with itself. Makes sense??!!...hope so.
Vazco33
Vazco33 on Nov 04 '09
Hey,dats very cute..Definitely I'll buy this tee ^^ Great idea..But I think the font is too thin..It will be hard to read from the further..



Cek out mine

http://www.threadless.com/critique/55908/High_Hi_ee_ll
TowerThePower
TowerThePower on Nov 05 '09
i like the backround texture...but i would extend it as a belt printing...



and in my opinion...u shoul take away the blue and red bars and modidy the kiss...



go ahead! ^__^
Adomissioner
Adomissioner on Nov 05 '09
If you keep the red and blue, (which is what makes it most look like an envelope), I would make the kiss red as well.



The overall thing confused me though... we aren't used to seeing a lot of returned envelopes with postal worker notes, plus the address and sender aren't in the traditional places, the whole envelope is vertical instead of horizontal... I think you maybe need to go way back and simplify so that the concept is grasped immediately.
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QuieroLuz
QuieroLuz on Dec 03 '09
Maybe make the notes from the post office a sticker with the guidelines on it?
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