rough, but ideas?

anything?

i really like the idea... how are you going to make the presentation look? flash would be best, um but overall i do like it... but i think it's missing something but i can't quite put my name on it :) sorry thats all i got!

hope it helps

-ali

yeah, i haven't been on here in a while, and all of this flash is throwing me off, I dont' know how really to work flash, so i'm gonna need to find some sort of template, but thanks!

I really like this. I think the different levels of color in the clouds works very well, but I think they need to be softer and rounder looking. Also, it looks like the detail line in the airplane is showing through to the cloud layer behind it. I'd make all the detail in the plane white.



Take a look at MINE if you can.

interesting, but how would it go on a shirt?

I would skip the detail in the sky, it'll make the image harder to remove from a box. Just have the t-shirt blue providing the sky. Also then you could make the city die out before it hits the edges; all to make the design more t shirt friendly. But it's a nice idea and a good drawing.



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I like this, I would love to see placement :]

Great design. I agree with A Morrell as far as simply using a light blue shirt to provide the sky background, if not, at least clean up the vector work a bit, maybe a little with the buildings as well - just simplifying. And yes, it would be cool to see the placement.

Cool design... I'd simplify the airplane a little, to make it more like the man. The contrast of the very simply-lined man against the detail-ish city background is very cool, it'd be nice to see it in the airplane too.



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I*Hawkeye

A few suggestions: 1) scale down the person so it doesn't overlap the sky; 2) place the place higher and a bit more off center; 3)once you decide on the shirt color, I'd try replacing the black with a darker shade of the tee color. Cheers!

Nice concept. agree with dngai on his 1 + 3 comments. Persoanly I'd print the syline accross the chest area of a shirt make the guy smaller so he's not breaking the line of the buildings and make the plane smaller and have it over to the right above the buildings. You'd have to make the kite string white to be visible. Also I think someone mentioned this higher up but I'd just use the t-shirt coluor for sky.



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http://www.threadless.com/critique/55687/Flock_Wallpaper

Lovely concept!! I would advise you to fix the sky a bit. In my opinion it looks too rough. Maybe adding some more realistic clouds, and moving the plane a bit more to the right would give the whole piece a better negative space! i would also make the line white, maybe that would add more of a connection between the guy and the plane!! Other than that it's awesome! Keep up the good work!! Would you be so kind to critique my design as well?? I'd appreciate it!! Fire in the hole!

This one didn't upload too well, but here's the shirt placement. I'm still trying to decide how to fade the buildings out. Maybe I can just have them go all the way around the shirt.



Ideas?

Really cool and if the buildings went all the way around that would be even better. One concern... the buildings on the left and right have the little bit of white behind them. That would be alright if you did it across all of them, but only having on the edges like that doesn't quite look right.

I don't think you need to wrap the buildings all around to make the design successful, but I agree the added white lines aren't needed - or put them on all the buildings. Great concept though, I like.

Great concept! Perhaps you could make the buildings taper down shorter on the sides. You have a lot of room on the shirt so it might balance it nicely to have the plane up high and to the right with the person down and to the left.



Take a look at mine?

Thanks mloring and samovar, the white was part of it just "not uploading too well," but i just wanted to get it up.

This has the placement with the wraparound of the city around the shirt.

I like this better. I think the wraparound buildings work. Maybe move the man and plane left some so the plane's wing is not in the shirt's armpit. Your clouds could use a little more work too, but I think you're getting close.

plane should be more small, as a kite looks like.

and connect thread at middle of the plane body

(now, it seemed like a dog)

I disagree with making it smaller, itll just look like a plane shaped kite (its already really small in comparison to a real plane.) Your clouds really need work, I would suggest putting in really puffy ones like you see in Toy Story.

cool.. personally i would like it more if the building wasn't wrapping all around..

Plane placement fixed.

Clouds fixed?

String placement on plane fixed?



Thanks in advance!

bumpity bump bump.

See if you can't make some realistic looking clouds to fit the style better. Also experiment with different colors. Im not a big fan of the white on blue



help with mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/54682/The_Lion#v4

more colors, more realistic clouds

okay, more color, and go in the direction of realistic clouds instead.

maybe more detail in the buildings or in the plane? adding more colors isn't always the best solution.

Clouds... better?

did the little guy lose weight? he looks so much skinnier now.



i like the contrast of the abstract clouds next to the really clean skyline and plane. nice work.



check mine out?

All-over print, i'm about to get the clouds all lined up, so that they match all around the shirt.



coming together?

left is front, right is back.

comments?

nothing?

It's good and I like the idea, I'm just not a big fan of the clouds as they are, reminds of 60s tie dye.



Any feedback would be great, thanks - Hurricane

meh?

I love the idea, I just find the clouds in the sky unnecessary.

no clouds... better? I kinda like the simplicity.

presentation?

It's a good idea but it needs work, the idea is great, the design can be better i think! Keep on working!



check also my design

I think that looks a lot a better without the clouds, submit!



Please critique mine - Ballooning

Sorry - like the presentation as well!