Hi, friends. I'm just looking for some feedback before I submit it. This is my first t-shirt design for threadless, so please critique!

you can't really see whats happening in there



Now get your crit on

It's just a stave where the music goes out by turning a crank

I've simplified the illustration in order to a better understanding

wow dats gr8:) if i say give shine to the music.

critique my other designs too

I love the artwork of the crow!! I think it needs a little refining of the inside mechanics to make that idea clear. Otherwise, the rooster works awesome by himself or use him in a different design!! :]



Good work.

What do you think about this new version??

It's even more simplified than the last one.

great idea.. how bout colouring the back part..

Thank you very much for all your ideas, they're very useful!!

This is the latest version, including a back design.

Any comment, please???

It's neat, but I feel it needs some work. The rooster could be shown better.

Like the idea of people inside operating.



Love the idea!



Check out mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/55872/Heart_to_Heart

I wonder if the "crank" part of the mechanism could be more obvious. PLus, the sheet music might want to contain the notes and then they fly free upon exiting beak?

i would delete some notes inside, you don't need so many to show main idea. and i wonder if color could be more bright.

needs some work to make it neater. and i would also delete some of the notes on the inside, add more on the outside.what is the thing growing on top of the tail, i just may not understand.



Could you help me with this and/or this