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v1 Good morning!, 938 days ago, click to expand
v2 Good morning!, 937 days ago, click to expand
v3 Good morning!, 937 days ago, click to expand
v4 Good morning!, current version








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son_ya
son_ya on Oct 31 '09
This is the latest version, including a back design.

Any comment, please???
Elle_Buzz
Elle_Buzz on Oct 31 '09
It's neat, but I feel it needs some work. The rooster could be shown better.
SBV5
SBV5 on Nov 01 '09
Like the idea of people inside operating.



Love the idea!



Check out mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/55872/Heart_to_Heart
skimball
skimball on Nov 03 '09
I wonder if the "crank" part of the mechanism could be more obvious. PLus, the sheet music might want to contain the notes and then they fly free upon exiting beak?
mmmaija
mmmaija on Nov 03 '09
i would delete some notes inside, you don't need so many to show main idea. and i wonder if color could be more bright.
lahammerman
lahammerman on Nov 03 '09
needs some work to make it neater. and i would also delete some of the notes on the inside, add more on the outside.what is the thing growing on top of the tail, i just may not understand.



Could you help me with this and/or this
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