Yeah, I gave up on keeping this out of the critiques.

bump

i like this...



poppy is a little to vibrant for me



but this is really nice



your last sub shoulda scored WAYYY higher



bullshit scorers



but yeah

help me out guys!! I'm addicted to the critique.

I agree about the poppy orange being a bit too much.



I think the drink could be more interesting , like something you would really want to drink but can't because of the umbrellas., Look through some photos of cocktails and the awesome layers of colours they have, and maybe some bubbles or something. curving up the side of the glass .



Did that satisfy your critique addiction?

I didn't know the f-bomb was a 5 lettered word. Rather than just stuffing the drink with umbrelles, laden it with fruit and all the other types of things drinks get stuck on them. With just umbrellas, it's pretty boring.

Pretty clever idea. I think it does need some work however. Bring some of that highlighting you have on the stem of the glass into the top of the glass. Maybe do some highlighting on the large umbrella as well.

I love it! I would make it a little bit smaller and center it on the shirt.

hi there, been takin a break from threadless for a while. Anyways, here it is with new layer, highlights on the umbrella and upper glass, bolder lines and a less obnoxious orange.

bump

can you work with some different colors?



i'm really liking this but once again the poppy is way too kablam

sure.

any t-color suggestions?

bump

hmm, you really are addicted to critiques. : ]



i really like v2's t color, but i would make the outlining gray a little darker, so it stands out.

you should probably add a few patterns on the umbrellas too, that would make it look way more interesting.

and i think i liked it better without the swirly design on the inside of the cup.



but those were just minor details, i think this would be fine without any more adjustments

Maybe a light blue shirt.

Here it is in a light bleu cheese, I mean, light blue shirt. I personally like this better.

As do I...can you add an orange layer to the drink maybe? I think the drink needs to be even more delicious looking.

I agree.

The light blue is a lot better.

it may already be a wiener!

Yeah, I'll make that layer orange since it was not possible on the orange shirt color. I will also start working on making some little designs on each of the umbrellas.

Very cute, I really like the concept. I would recommend changing the green...I don't like that shad very much.



Comment back please!

I made the layer orange, changed the green a bit, and cleaned up some of the lines. I am also contemplating whether or not to put question marks on the large umbrella.

bump

i actually like this the way it is. i don't think you need question marks on the umbrella, but you could always try it and see. if you wanted to incorporate some additional irony, you could always make it rain on your tropical drink and put that large umbrella to use.

I love it! Who put "needs work?!"

hahahah this is too good you need to submit this already

this is great.



maybe add an umbrella laying beside the glass. might help balance out the massive umbrella up top.

no, I like the awkward balance... it adds to the "what the fuck?!" feel of the drink.

but the bottom of the glass gets lost in the design, and your eyes are currently drawn directly to the big umbrella up top, and are constantly distracted by it.

fair enough. I still like it that way.

hahahaha

What if I had large portions of the drink overflowing due to the massive ammount of umbrellas and created a puddle to balance it out???

what if this had some of the drink overflowing??

haha, really like it. made me laugh when first saw it. great idea!

what if this had some of the drink overflowing??



give it a shot.

to use a jack black quote tighten up the hinges it looks a little sloppy joe. but idk i kinda like it a little messy

submit it, so good!

Do you think the puddle works to balance it out, or should I do without it?

puddle is fine. Are you ever going to submit it for a design?

I don't like how the puddle looks

sour: yes



colin: what about it

How'dsit look without the big umbrella? I have a feeling it might be most balanced that way. Puddle is okay, but if you could make it look good without, that would be better.

I don't know, it just doesn't make sense. I think it looks awkward. Maybe it's just a personal preference.

Maybe have some of the liquid running down the glass as well so it leads to the puddle. I think this would work fine without the one big umbrella. It seems to be a little distracting to me. Make some of the smaller ones red for balance if you take it out. Funny idea!

wats the line in the midle of the glass of squiggles?

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no puddle



or Need's idea with liquid running down into the puddle. otherwise it throws me off

Lose about half of those little umbrellas and add in pineapple slices, limewheels, cherries and maybe a chamelion. And consider losing the big umbrella and the puddle.

Yeah I agree with losing th puddle and the big umbrella. Nice Colors!

no puddle, no big umbrella

Where's the straw? Could put it just lying next to the drink

Keep umbrella, keep puddle, add liquid running down, add straw lying at bottom, submit.

I agree with the above

no puddle.

with straw and drips. I think that I'd like to sub this un.

hahaha, fantastic!

lol, girl drinks are always funny

I will buy this if it's printed by the way, just to wear it so girls totally think I'm gay and then after talking about Laguna Beach, the Simple Life, and my passion for art we'll be BFF forever. And then I'll get them drunk and make out with them cause they won't see it coming! SURPRISE ATTACK!

That was the whole idea behind the design.

i love it submit it

The only problem with the straw is that it offers a viable solution to the problem of "how the fuck am I supposed to drink this?" Because the answer is "put the straw in it."

The straw gives more visual balance, but I don't think it offers a solution at least not a particular good one. I think one of those little umbrellers laying upside down next to the straw would add a little interest and balance up the bottom of the design which looks just a little bit empty. Or anything to busy-up the bottom section

this is pretty funny i say sub it.

lol sub it.

sub it!

F**** great

was this submited?

sub now please