This is still a work in progress, let me know what you guys think, and also let me know if there are any copyright issues with this idea.



Thanks-ibye

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Bump for the night

Hahahahahahahahaha! I'd sub this! It's really good.



Can you give me some feed back? Thanks!

camo

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I don't like sub. Shirt would be more interesting without punchline. Then it's more mysterious.



Think of it as a punchline of a joke already written on shirt. You got the joke, and shirt is all boring then.



Also Rabbit could have it's tongue out. And bot eyes crossed.



Just my advices. :)

Olja- You make a good point, maybe it would be stronger with out the text joke. I'll continue revising with that in mind.



I also had a version with the tongue out which might work, but I like that one eye is open. Thanks!

I'll agree with removing the type.

hehe, yea one eye open and tongue out would be cool. I'm diggin the kids characters. Little detail touch up on the green dots overlapping the black hill lines. Other than that, looking good.

That green dot thing was pure sloppiness. Thanks.

I feel like the whole design needs to be more extreme:



*Utter shock on the boy's face

*Maniacal anger on the girl's face

*Maniacal font for the text (Yes, I like the text being there.)

*The Rabbit should be more splayed out, completely KO'ed.



Please take a look at one that I'm working on:



The Original Pixel Art

I'll see what I can do about making more extreme.