Hello, everyone! Thanks for your visit.
Thoughts on this?
I'm not sure about the title:
1) POP ruins your teeth (current)
2) POPxplosion (I think it doesn't work, but something like it might work)
3) BLAM-KAPOW-KRASH-WHAM-BOOM or BLAMKAPOWKRASHWHAMBOOM (I kinda dig it)
I'd like to thank irocko, manos, ndstillie, and everyone else posting really helpful stuff.
Comments appreciated.

Wow this is really cool. I personally like the current title, and I'd probably buy the shirt in blue. You should try putting it on one of the models.

A critique would be much appreciated

Nice! 3) BLAM-KAPOW-KRASH-WHAM-BOOM or the other one, it relates to music like a drummer thrashing his kit. Really cool though, maybe a tad smaller on the tee and perhaps a silver instead of white (people tend to not like white)?

If you have time, could you please comment and vote on my design? and check my blog for a guess the score contest : )

DUDE!! that looks awesome.. I'd totally wear that shirt, and it's true.. coke eats your teeth little by little each time you drink it

this is so cool. i love the halftone dots. but i dont know how to create them. : / know any good tutorials?

please critique me...if time permits.
my innovation tshirt
just visiting
the shore

This works nicely, sub it. Happy birthday, too.

it's pretty cool. sub it! :)

I dig! sub!

very good, looks kind of like an A bomb cloud. clever with the teeth!
submit!

Ballin! 5$

WOW! Thanks everyone for the big feedback!

*BAM! BUMP! ZAP!*

awsome!submit.
dont mind plz check mine.
http://www.threadless.com/profile/997187/b12345/critiques

*BUMP! SPLASH!*

Sweet! Very nice work!

Feedback, positive OR negative is always welcome.

The Usual Suspects

that looks nice, but it seems it needs something more. it might be the police interrogating a drunk guy about the suspects, or something else. I don't really know what... but keep working on it, I see the potential.
btw, thanks for your comment on mine!

That was for helldozer, sorry. Anyway, people seem to like this. I guess I'll sub it soon. Thanks everyone who dropped by.

Subbed!

Great piece, mate. I love the faces and the use of the mighty DOT. Well done. :-)

GLOW! BANG! KABOOM!

Well, that didn't work...
Let's try again:
POP ruins your teeth (submission)

nice scored it 5$
can you check out my critique here

I think that the Boom is the best one, it has the most nice teeth ^^
probably the only thing that I'd change is the higher part of the glow.. I mean that in the dark it's difficult understanding that it's an explosion..

Thanks, Valeria! Actually, I can't change it now, because it's already subbed.

Top stuff! Awesome presentation with the colour change thing going on. Impressive. Well done.

this is soooo cool! *o*

Thank you! It scored 2.11, my highest yet

SUBMIT.

Only 2.11???
Tough crowd.

Can you please check out my babies and give me some advice -

http://www.threadless.com/critique/56470/Henry_the_80_s


http://www.threadless.com/critique/56632/And_on_a_lighter_note


http://www.threadless.com/critique/56466/Pope_rock_musical


http://www.threadless.com/critique/56462/G_raffes


http://www.threadless.com/critique/56574/Art_school


I know they're not as good as yours which is why theres no way I'm going to get them printed.
Any help will be much appreciated

HOLY HALF-TONES BATMAN!


I am glad glow in the dark stuff has made a come-back. It's like I am reliving the cool parts of my childhood.