Music can be frustrating so this is a good way to express love for music while at the same time showing the frustration that comes with it.

Nice shirt, It would be cool if you had the splatter paint in sort of bright neon colors, over your music measure, so you can see there is definitely a music measure, and the neon will stand out above it. It would be sweet.

That's a good idea!!!

It has a Ralph Steadman quality that I like. And I like the idea of the clean original bars, staff and notes in one colour and the blotchiness in another. I don't think you need the text, though, it's self-explanatory without it.

Music can be frustrating so this is a good way to express love for music while at the same time showing the frustration that comes with it.

this is probably hard to see but the notes actually spell out music.

triplet-M

slur-U

quarter rest-S

quarter note-I

c chord-C

this is probably hard to see but the notes actually spell out music.

triplet-M

slur-U

quarter rest-S

quarter note-I

c chord-C

Unique, but probably only a musician will understand what you are getting at with the notes.

It seems a little bright for me, and I'm not sure the perspective is helping out, it just seems to make it more busy.

oh dear!

v1 definitely looks better, and the spelling out of the word "music" is impossible to get

I liked V1 better design wise and color wise. I also agree with mm.1, this one is too busy and the perspective looks like it needs work.

would it look ok if the colors were glow in the dark or glow in the UV rays or whatever?

Yeah, lose the perspective and change the neon blobs into just one colour, something dark and close to black but not actually black. Far too busy right now.

Maby neon was a bit too much, but I'd fix the perspective on it first, and then get a feel for the appropriate colors

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Agree with ^. First work on getting the design right and then focus on the colors.

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ok i took the perspective off and reduced it to one measure. do i need to keep the neon or change to black splats?

ok i took the perspective off and reduced it to one measure. do i need to keep the neon or change to black splats?

keep it gives it some flavor =]

I liked the black and white much much more, though it seems you just put some spots and that's it, I would try the first version with things like twisted music notes or notes on top of each other.

As it is in the 4rd version it's just some colorful spots on music notes.



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very cool shirt. I would definitely buy this.

should i make the splotches in that glow in the dark ink?

it looks nice, and I like the placement of the design. I think you musical notes should be in front of the splotches, but that might be going against your intitial design. good job!

It's too colorful... And I liked the first messy B&W design much better... Too bad you dropped that line.



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I prefer 1st version. Expressive and one color.

I like the 1st version better too.

Feels like paintball, to me.

totally ^^. I saw this V and thought "No." went back to V1 and thought it was quite nice.

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I also like first version better.

I like the first one, much spontaneous!! Add some color splotches and glow and thats it. good luck.

love it

LOVE IT!

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I like the 1st version.. (black and white on the 4th version looks cool!)

Ok i brought back the b and w

I kinda like the first version the most

It looks like the composer had a nerves brackdown while writting the music

should i have kept the text from the first one and what is on the first one that yall like better?

maybe less spots? towards the middle it becomes less music more splotches

I have to say that I like the first version the best, but I'd like it better without the word 'music' and I also think the splotches could be more deliberately placed. And more organically formed, I'd like to see more drippage.

maybe coming out of the mouth of some creature or a child or something...

you are getting there continue.. try to move arround the design ..



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Looks like Splatter In D Minor.



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I agree with rlgallow in that the spots need to be more organic, like they happened while the composer was writing it down. In that sense, I think that the actual notes need to be a little more unsteady and shaky, like it all came out of the same quill.

I think it is too close to this design:

http://www.threadless.com/product/1045/Splatter_In_D_Minor

what is it about the first one that yall like? I would like to incorporate whatever that thing is into this one to make it better! PLEASE COMMENT!!!!

hmmm, it is a cool idea, but its also quite similar to the other design that's already been printed. look at that design and try to move away from it a bit, possibly with color usage. the first one does look good, although i honestly can't place why. and i would say try to tilt it, warp it, angle it or add other elements to give it better movement, the straight horizontal is too lethargic, it lacks the energy and movement that the design begs for, a more diagonal or flowing composition.