I need some feedback. The bee will be bigger in the final version.

Don't like the pink gun.

Changed the placement, made the gun the color of the shirt, and a few other minor changes.

the gun looks much better now and the right side works! the green leaves make the flower part...

This version looks much better. I do find a gun that shots bees quite scary though ;)

Any suggestions as to what else could make this better?

Whaddya think of the bird?

It could be on a mantle piece next to other normal objects.



Or in a window looking out on a battle field. Needs something in the BG anyway IMO.

no bird.

*bump*

Made it a little bigger and removed the bird.

I would like to see it with the black stroke taken off the flowers and vines. I feel it would give em a bit more of a burst!

Here it is without the stroke on the flowers/vines.

ehh, i'd bring back the outlines, hahaha. mahybe a thinner stroke? and i think this might bee done, unless u want to make something for BG. clouds? idk. i'm at a loss for now.



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I just saw a design in the scoring of a gun with flowers coming out.

Where at? Link please.