I was working on this today and was thinking about this as a t-shirt. This is my first time doing this and I would really appreciate comments and criticism. I have no idea what this is. I think it looks cool though.

You submitted the whole image, right?
Make the design the proper size on the shirt and add a little more contrast. I think the eyes need more expression.
I like the idea a lot though, and it definitely fits with the style of Threadless designs.

I might bookmark this if I saw it in the store.

This is a cute design, but us girls would be out of luck unless we wanted to have eye-boobs! You might want to think about changing the position of the design.

I was working on this today and was thinking about this as a t-shirt. This is my first time doing this and I would really appreciate comments and criticism. I have no idea what this is. I think it looks cool though.

UPDATED.

You should probably remove the squiggle. It seems out of place. Maybe shift the face down a bit. I think the face looks great, though.

Agreed.

I was working on this today and was thinking about this as a t-shirt. This is my first time doing this and I would really appreciate comments and criticism. I have no idea what this is. I think it looks cool though.

UPDATED AGAIN: Now I centered the face, got rid of the squiggle.

Much, much better.

the nose got a bit of a strange form looking at it a little longer ;-)

i think you should make the nose a little less phallic...it just has that look about it!

Crit if ya can :)
Balding man