Thought I'd do a design of Kafka's classic. Still not finished though... tossing up whether I need the "Metamorphosis" text at bottom or if I should go further and add the latin names of all the beetles as little name tags under the pictures? Should I try to age the image a bit with stains etc? Any other crits are also welcome, though its a bit tricky changing things on the bugs as they are watercolour :P

wow, great concept! the bug colors are damn good, so you should leave them as is--i dunno if like the placement so much--what about arranging them in a row (in increasing size?), where at the end you have the man

the bugs are perfect. I'd dig latin names, and also some smudges and things.



I love that story, I cried and cried and cried.