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v1 Nun Fu!, current version








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Yamiloo
Yamiloo on Oct 10 '09
God shows mercy.

They don't.
halfamaster
halfamaster on Oct 10 '09
Nun fu FTW!
N3M3S1S
N3M3S1S on Oct 10 '09
I think it would be better without the text.
izzabell
izzabell on Oct 10 '09
this shirt is really awesome. but to be easier to print, you might have to take the lines off the sleeves and the collar and take the image away from the bottom and top of the shirt. the text looks fine on it so don't change that.



if you can print as is, then you should because i really like it.
TSP712
TSP712 on Oct 10 '09
Looks pretty good : ) I don't see any problems.
Lucanio
Lucanio on Oct 10 '09
i think the text could look better. maybe a different font? why do you have the n lowercase but the F capitalized?



check out mine:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/54260/Magic_Mushroom
WisCas
WisCas on Oct 10 '09
Haha! I was just going to blame you for pinching awesome art from the Sister Claire-comic, but then I realized that you are the maker. :p



I would try to lose the beam in the background and maybe throw in some colors.



Keep it up! :D



Family Portrait
Hagnii
Hagnii on Oct 10 '09
I love the illustration.



I don't think the text is necessary though.



Help me out?
Jillybean79
Jillybean79 on Oct 12 '09
I think it's perfect! I would definitely keep the text, but maybe put it on the back?
JoyceTheVoice
JoyceTheVoice on Oct 13 '09
It's perfect.
JoyceTheVoice
JoyceTheVoice on Oct 13 '09
JoyceTheVoice
JoyceTheVoice on Oct 13 '09
I said, it's PERFECT.
2 days later
shagel7
shagel7 on Oct 15 '09
yeah, my only comment would be about the F being the only capital letter. other than that I love it ^_^
kaleigh07
kaleigh07 on Oct 15 '09
This makes me think of "The Dangerous Lives of Altar Boys" Hahah
David Dennis
David Dennis on Oct 15 '09
Love you're illustration style.

Maybe make the nun in the front bigger to give it a focal point, without the lines in the background being so intense.
stretchz14
stretchz14 on Oct 15 '09
I love the illustration, i think the text is good, but i think the lines in the background are distracting.



please check out mine:

A True Block Party
EYE-Q
EYE-Q on Oct 15 '09
I have to agree with "stretchz14". The background is very confusing and it is a shame, ince the illustration is quite nice.



Any suggestions on mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/54602/KING_FROG
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