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i think the text could look better. maybe a different font? why do you have the n lowercase but the F capitalized?
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Haha! I was just going to blame you for pinching awesome art from the Sister Claire-comic, but then I realized that you are the maker. :p
I would try to lose the beam in the background and maybe throw in some colors. Keep it up! :D Family Portrait |
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yeah, my only comment would be about the F being the only capital letter. other than that I love it ^_^
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Love you're illustration style.
Maybe make the nun in the front bigger to give it a focal point, without the lines in the background being so intense. |
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I love the illustration, i think the text is good, but i think the lines in the background are distracting.
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