L&C never anticipated to stumble upon a modern world.



I need to clear the graphics up a bit but I'd like to know what you guys think of the idea.

Any feedback would be appreciated!

L&C never anticipated to stumble upon a modern world.



Feedback would be appreciated!

Haha clever.



I wouldn't leave the white for the buildings if you're going to put the design on colored shirts. Try some basic shading to match the different colors of the shirts (different colors of blues for the blue shirt, different colors of browns for the tan one, etc)



Also, the figure on the left (don't know if it's Lewis or Clark) looks a bit feminine. Maybe it's the skirt looking thing. Perhaps you could make them look more like pants.



Good luck with this! It has potential!



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L&C never anticipated to stumble upon a modern world.



Feedback please!

love the concept !



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Cool =) I like red city , but maybe on some other shirt color.

The white in the city was beautiful, but of course now the figures are visually taken out of the city in a good way, the city is just not as yummy like in v2

Yeah I liked the white and grays to the buildings cause it added more depth. I'm still trying to play around with the best color scheme to go with, any ideas? And thanks for the feedback!

i think either stick with the white fill on both the people and the city, or lose both, or colour both, but i think the unfilled city with the filled people looks a lil weird.



you could try other people from different times too, like gladiators, medieval knights etc etc

L&C never anticipated to stumble upon a modern world.



Played around with the colors, I think they match up a bit better. And I think I'm gonna add in some other historical figures as suggested earlier. What do you guys think? Any and all feedback would be appreciated, thanks!

great design! i really like the linework. i think maybe you could shade the explorers a little more. it kinda just looks like clark sat in something. i dig the idea though! good luck! =)

Great idea ;D i like the yellow and red tee especially :) i agree with colormekoye, add more shading to the explores and this will be an amazing teeshirt. i really like your style ;)



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L&C never anticipated to stumble upon a modern world.





I need to clear the graphics up a bit but I'd like to know what you guys think of the idea.


Any feedback would be appreciated!

Added some shades to Lewis and Clark.



I also changed the color on the yellow one to match the t more instead of standing out as much. I don't know if it looks best like that so I left it black and white on the other ones. Let me know which you guys prefer.



Any and all feedback would be appreciated! Thanks guys.

hi there, really like your style, if I have to choose, Id go

fot the purple or white. and good idea.



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Personally I like the one color design from the previous versions.

Nice line work and cool idea.



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Thanks for the feedback guys. Any other colors you'd like to see?



I've still got half saying just the lines, and the other half liking the shading in the buildings. Anyone else prefer one over the other?

I like the purple best. Very good, def submit



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i like your idea, the purple one best, but I think it could be even better if you colored in some of the buildings or at least made them darker

i like your idea, the purple one best, but I think it could be even better if you colored in some of the buildings or at least made them darker

Umm, this is pretty awesome. I would totally buy this.



But may I suggest making it a bit clearer what our explorers are standing on? It looks like they're standing on trees, or surfing on clouds. And why does Lewis look like Saquejewea?

awesome. i like the yellow



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Added boots to Clark and added the bottom to the bush. Feedback please!

Also added darker shades in the buildings.

this is excellent, great drawing.

although i think you should add some more detail to both persons right there. i don't know, shadows maybe? you play around with it and see what happens

excellent job, i love the city behind.



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L&C never anticipated to stumble upon a modern world.



Added the shadows, any other feedback?

Hey my kinda T. The yellow and white T's look great.

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I think these colors are a bit dull, and makes the art lose some of it's charm. How about on a darker t-shirt? Maybe light sand coloring on a dark brown t?

Thanks guys. Do you think L&C look good black and white, or should I make them a different color?

love it with the purple shirt!

keep it as it is.

yes great with the shadows!

i like it a lot on purple too,

great



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Looks great - my only concern is that this would have a limited audience in terms of understanding the humour.

Really? Not understanding American history would be a real bummer. Any tips on making Lewis and Clark more recognizable? I found it a little hard to do because it is from the back side.

.. dont know how to spell her name but Saquajuea? .. i guess pointin to the city with a ? above her head...... ? would that work?

The yellow one is superb!

Well it's Lewis and Clark... not Sacajawea. There's no braid or long hair... is there anything I can add to Lewis to make him more manly? Maybe boots? I don't want to change his outfit up too much cause that's how pioneers dressed up... Ideas?

I guess what I mean is that only Americans will get this joke. I'm from Australia and the only reason I get it is because I've seen "Night at the Museum" ... erm twice.

Haha alright fair enough. Well thanks guys, any other things I should add before I submit?

submit!

this kills. all the way. SUBMIT

Thanks for all the feedback guys, it's getting processed and will be up to vote soon!

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i like the white !

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haha :)) nice :)

Hmm...Reviewing the thread, I'm not from the US but I do get the humor :)