A very tedious project, but it turned out decent in my opinion.



Inspiration came from a history teacher who made the comment, "Don't judge my art, I only draw in stick figures." This sketch is entirely made up of stick figures with a blue-green color scheme. A large placement on the shirt is the only thing that looked good to me.



Any and all critiques are appreciated!

very clever, and i like it, but 'm worried that when printed the little stick figures won't show up right, but i'm not sure about their resolution or anything...

I love it, great job



Check Mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/54338/I_only_date

Hey Man! Thanx for your comment on mine! :)



I agree with pixl about the stick guys being too small. What if you only put half of his face on the shirt--like imagine slicing his head diagonally fromthe top right ot the bottom left and put the left half on the shirt--the hair and eyebrows are actually the coolest part of the face w/ all those sticks. You would only have one eye on the shirt so really focus on making that eye standout too. I think it will be great! Good luck!

big picture out of little picture is usually well received, sub it and see what happens

i like the idea, but i think it should be more subtle.. i mean, i think people should notice the little stick guys first, and then the bigger face..



also for that, you could make a better use of shadows/light.. and not just work with outlining.. i don't know if you get what i mean.. so i did this very quick:

http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/1222/helpbu.jpg



btw, thanks for your comment on my design.. i really appreciate it.. (:

here's the link:



just an idea

Wow! How long did that take you?! I love it!

Wow. That's awesome.



Please comment:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/54356/Forget_ME_Not

your idea is really great! love it :)



if you have time, please give comment on here :)

happy hello chick

I love this idea.



I would say that I'm a bit concerned about the right eye's placement. Although the off centered design you did does add a bit more visual interest I would say that if printed the eye on the right might be obscured by the wearer because it is in the crease of the arm.



And although I know you don't want to be critiqued on your drawing I have some tips for you if I may.



I had a horrible time drawing faces when I first started sketching. But once you get the general rules down for facial proportions it becomes a piece of cake. Especially on drawings like this one where its mainly contours and outlines and tricky shadows and highlights aren't a problem.



This site helped me quite a bit:





Practice makes perfect and I believe this design could be real interesting if you tightened up the overall drawing a bit.



Any ideas for mine?

Unbelievable Peace

Oops the Face Drawing site is:



http://www.portrait-artist.org/face/

Thank you guys so much for your comments and suggestions! I value every single one of them. : D



pxls, that was a concern of mine as well. I could redo the entire sketch with a larger brush (it's a custom brush of a stick figure), but that would be a bit frustrating and presents the problem of not being able to have small enough lines for detail. I've been working in 3000 pixels, by the way so hopefully it won't be a problem. Also, if you look at that second slide, the image in the background isn't zoomed in too terribly far and the stick figures are still very distinguishable.



charity.ryan, I'll definitely try that and see what it looks like. I experimented a little bit with that already, but it's definitely worth a shot. My only worry is that the nose will be obscured or hidden which may distort the image of the face too much.



ninopolisel, I understand what you're saying. I'll try to add some shading and lighting or at least suggestions of it, but with one constant medium (such as these stick figures) it's a bit difficult to show value. But yeah, I'll definitely try to bring out some shading.



hungrycrocodile, ummm....about 2 weeks a little bit each day. You get burnt out pretty quick just placing stick figures everywhere.



Lmo6, Yeah, I was concerned about placement of the eye as well. However, I don't know if it will matter incredibly much if the eye is distorted. It would probably be distorted enough to not even resemble an eye (with the arms down, of course). If that happens viewer might be able to ignore it completely or assume it was there. charity's idea though may solve that problem as well.

Oh, I was completely expecting critiques on my actual drawing! I'm actually surprised you are the only one. That site helps a ton though! Thank you! I can already see areas where I can improve (mouth structure, nose proportions, and eye detail). Thanks again, though. Your suggestions have been invaluable.

hahahaha cute idea :D I'd play around with the placement of the features some more - maybe bring the mouth a little lower, maybe change the sizes of some of the facial features.... might also be cool if the little stickmen were just a tad bigger, but I understand if doing that would be an immense hassle :P

I dig the concept. I think the right eye being off might hurt the overall design. I think you can keep the two eyes on the front of the shirt and still have it bleeding off. I think it might be a tad stronger if the hair was dark - adding more men and just having highlights.



I say the idea is good and it should fetch a good score.

Alright, I worked on they eyes, nose, and mouth, but there's only so much I can do with simply outlines and no shading.



I tried the shading idea that was suggested, but it just started looking messy.



Here are few placement options that hopefully remedy the problems addressed. Let me know which one you like best.



Also, I tweaked the colors just a bit. Let me know if there's a certain color scheme you'd like to see.



Again, any and all comments are appreciated!

I want to see more line weight in the face. the neck and the hair are really good, but I would want to see that through out the whole face.

I like the one eyed version better

It's a good idea, but I agree with what people said earlier, the stick figures probably won't show up super clear if it's printed when they're super tiny. I also like the one eyed version myself.

i like the one eyed version too, i think the other one is too much of the face.



Rate mine plz? thanks!

cool as!



Crit mine please?

http://threadless.com/critique/54453/Caged_Up

i like this a lot, i prefer the one with only one eye

:)

Interesting idea.

very unique and cool concept...i think the half face with only 1 eye looks better than the other....can you give me a critique I'm Late

Thanks for the critiques guys. I'll thicken the lines and try to get a zoom placement somewhere between the two. I want to try to include at least some of the nose.

i like the one eyed one better, but that is personal opinion. i also like the colours you have used ;)



Could you critique mine??

King of the jungle

I'd go with the one eyed version. Really cool idea! I think the ear could use a bit of touching up, but other than that, I think this is good to go!



I've also got one:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/54637/Royal_Flying_Machine

Very cool idea, well executed. I like the bottom shirt placement best.



Please check out an score Darth Side of the Moon

Took me FOREVER, but I think I found a good placement. I can't decide whether I like it zoomed more or less though. The two new versions are V4 and V5. To see zoomed in less look at the version below this.



More (V3) shows more of the design, but is less interesting in some respects.



Less (V4) adds more interest to the design I believe, but also has a lot of negative space.



Help me decide. I am really truly torn.



Any and all comments are appreciated!

Okay scratch that last design. I messed up on the wording and everything.



How does this placement and zoom amount look? We lose the ear, and have a lot of negative space, but I think it looks good from a design standpoint. I also have a similar placement zoomed out more ready if you guys would like to see that.



Any and all comments are appreciated!

I forgot to mention that I thickened all of the lines and added a whole lot more hair (too bad we can't see it anymore).

I vote submit it!, really cool design, I can only draw stick figures too, but not in any cool patern like yours. I think it'll get printed! I like the placement too, the one with only half the face and the ear looks really cut off.



Concerned Hangman

Not a Pirate (Just Clumsy)

Plan of A Tack

Thanks for the support. I really appreciate it. : )



... I really hate it when people vote "Don't Submit" and they don't say anything about it.

I really like this design. It's very creative and original. I know the placing and changing of the color was a pain though. Lol. My vote for this is to submit it.

i like what you've done, it's got the popart feel to it, maybe you could toss into that contest.



Critique This

Cool idea! But it's kind of hard to notice the stick figures if you don't look close enough.

^ But that's the beauty of it, right?

I like the concept and design. Maybe on a different color of a shirt? It could make it more interesting and epic.

i agree with amessage22, i think this could be enhanced by a different color shirt.



check out one of my designs if you get a chance.

Clicketh

i like the idea, but all the figures are the same. would be much cooler if there is some variation between them. also try to draw them a lot cleaner, it looks like they've all got different gradients around them... (it makes them fuzzy)



my Lavalamp is up for voting :-)

that is a nice design though it is really hard to tell those are stick figures.

If you get a chance comment on mine please

For me, the best part about it is not seeing immediately that they're stick figures. I really like the size and placement of the design.

What other color shirt could it be? Gray?



Mtths, trust me, this is just about as clean as they can get. Each figure has an outline of color but the fuzziness, is just the quality of the jpg image. I had to reduce the size of the files to fit it all in a flash presentation. The original is 3000 X 3000 pixels.



Grr...of course it's difficult to tell they're stick figures until you are up close. Sorry, I'm just a little frustrated by those kind of comments right now. Especially with people voting "Don't Submit" without commenting.

I'd put it on a silver gray or heather gray shirt (whatever looks better) and submit it. It's a really cool idea, and you've been working on it for a long time. It's ready to go!! :D

Silver gray color shirt this time. Personally I don't like it as much, but if you guys think it looks better, then there you go.



I actually messed with the color scheme a bit and a red/purple look is actually quite appealing with gray. Should I post it?



Oh and mtths, I appreciated your comment on V4, but you have to understand that your suggestion of varying every single stick figure is close to impossible, especially at this point. You do realize there's over a thousand figures here, right? Maybe next time.



Thanks for all of the comments guys. I'll probably submit one more version with the two different color shirts and a different model to push into the running.

personally i liked it better on white, it made everything stand out a bit more

Yeah, me too. I'll try cream though.

Here it is in cream.



Once again, any and all comments are appreciated!

Completely new color scheme on a silver gray tee. Better or worse?

better. ;)

I'd love to see red/purple on gray. I think that may be the winning combination. These greens somehow pull me back to those ancient monitors with black screens and the green flashing prompt.

omg awesome!!! this is it. this is the perfect color combo.

hahahaha I posted at the very moment when you posted the new version :)

Haha, great minds think alike. : )



Thanks for the feedback.

Oh, and I think I'm going to change that indigo at the top to a sky blue.

Looks less busy on this background.

I would have liked it even better if you had stylized it a bit more. Less drawing and more print/halftone -feeling.

But then again, I am a sucker for halftone.

A truly interesting concept.

I really, really like what you're doing with the stick figures, but I'm not too excited about the face.

Fonus, I don't really understand what you're saying here. I mean I understand a print/halftone feeling, but how would I incorporate it into a design like this one?



eDigitalArt, what about the face needs to be changed?



I want to improve this, I really do. I just need specifics because I'm at the point where I know there's more to be done, but I can't see what it is yet.

would be cool if you added some shading on the face still made up of the figures.. then maybe a whole gradient simulated process for the whole sub? .. just a thought

^ I've actually tried that. It didn't look too hot. : (

I REALLY like this one. : )

Cool idea. :)

Critique-wise, when you're viewing the guy wearing the shirt, the design in the background is kinda distracting. Maybe if you lower the opacity of the design in the background, it might not look so distracting. Maybe, also, have a different colored background instead of white. Just an idea.



Oh, btw, thanks for the critique! :)

Maybe I can change the look of the iPod or make something different.



I've also seen somebody use the iPod.

http://www.threadless.com/submission/161321/Grandpa_Cassette

Ooh! Havn't viewed it in a while--I love the zoomed look but I miss the hair--it was alot of fun with all those stick men. V2 was great with the one-eye version. Either color scheme works in my opinion--have you tried filling in the eyes a bit--empty pupils always bother me.



Lookin good though--keep it up!:)

The guy looks stoned. Or at the very least, disinterested.

I cant think of anything that you should improve. Looks like you reached the designs full potential. I am not too sure about the concept though. I have tried something similar which did not catch on (take a look at "simple" in my designs if you are interested). Good luck with the submission.

thedebaser, yeah, it sort of does. But the expression isn't really the point. I wanted him to just look 'normal' so that it makes you investigate futher.



RoeeSch...I don't know that our designs are really that similar to be honest. Yes, we both have small figures on our shirts, but they are completely different concepts.

I think the design needs to be smaller on the shirt. There is a lot of work in the hair and its not being properly reflected on the current tee. Yours is much more like this http://www.threadless.com/submission/235807/Ninjas_UNITE than what RoeeSch suggested. I think it will do better than that though.



If you have time, could you please comment and vote on my design?

^ Yeah, I actually saw that design while it was on the critique blog and commented on it (mainly about the similarity of the two).



And I've tried a less amount of zoom for the face, but most people liked the bigger face. In the next version I'll show a comparison of the two faces.

When you look at this design on actual shirt you might not be able to see the stick figures as they are unless you get close to the wearer. I'm actually not sure you need the colour. This might work better as a one colour and remove the blur from around the edges of the figures would make the figures easier to see. It's still great as it is though. Good luck :)

The blur is an unintentional result of blending the stick figures layer with a color pattern with color blending mode. I'll see if there's an alternate way to get the colors to transfer without the blurry edges of each figure.

Looks great! I'd submit it!

looks neat...........what kind of printing technique you are look to print it in. it a fine job.............once printed will look great ....good going

Just normal printing I think. There's only 3 colors here. Thanks for the feedback. : )



I'm still gathering ideas for some weekend revisions.

submit it!

plz critique mine!

http://www.threadless.com/profile/997187/b12345/critiques

Alright, big revisions. There are still a few minor tweaks I need to get to, but I wanted to get your opinions on the changes first.



Slide 1: Design on a tee

Slide 2: Detail



Still working on a model image.



Any and all comments are appreciated!

Like it =) But I think the left pupil (from us) it is necessary to shift to the right.

Rad idea but I agree that the eyes arent quite together... Try flipping the image horizontally [or look at it in a mirror].



Fix the eyes and I would wear it :)

Alrighty, I can definitely fix the eyes.



And I actually have flipped it horizontally to make sure proportions and locations were correct. I moved the left eye because I thought it looked off. I guess it looks worse from this perspective.



Wait, is it the whole eye or just the pupil that needs fixing?

what a fun idea! if this one doesn't do well, i would say try it again but with a non human medium. i would say the eye looks fine except the pupil.

I like it, at first I didn't get it though but after i went through the other versions then I caught on for what you were kinda going for. The only think I would suggest is maybe placing a few stick figures outside of the face just so people understand that its made of stick figures but i dont think that really matters a whole lot. I definitely dig the gradient effect too

Thanks for the comments guys.



Yeah, dannodepf, that's a good idea. I might try a landscape/cityscape if it doesn't make it. Thanks for the suggestion.



kingforaday, hmmm...I don't know if that would help them understand that they were stick figures instead of just appearing as stray dots. Maybe I could try a low opacity large stick figure overlay or something.

Nice! I'm glad you added the hair back in and the muti-tones are really cool! Yeah, the pupil needs a little tweaking. Good stuff!

cool! i think just the left pupil needs fixing not the whole eye; it kinda looks like each eye is looking in a slightly different direction. i don't kno about kingforaday's idea tho, or the stick overlay, bcuz it seems to me like one of the coolest parts would be that from far away you wouldn't be able to get it. but then when you got closer to the person, you would see the little stick figures and tht would be pretty sick

^ That's true. It's kinda what I've been hoping for all along.

I don't want repeat other, so I'd just say that maybe the print is too large to be printed. Don't get you design rejected just because it requires printing on sleeve stitches and stuff...



Good luck!



Mine:

Earth: 1, Moon: 0

Opinions are welcomed!

Very good thought. Thank you!

Nice one, don't think I would add anything :P

Whew! I feel like I've been working on this forever.



Fixed the left pupil, adjusted some minor errors, and worked on the presentation aspect.



How's it look? Am I done?

That's really awesome! I liked the pixelated touch, it added much elegance and a slight comic book effect, it is simply amazing! I would totally buy this for my older brother, it's hot, modern, and really shows your artistic ability! Keep Rocking It!

you've come a long way there. sub it.

This is very cool. I had to go back and look at all the steps of this process. Looks like you put in a lot of work but well worth it. This is great. I think it is ready to submit.

This version is really spectacular! The level of detail is exceptional, but it also looks great at a distance. Such a great concept, please submit!!!

Wow, this is really neat! Some of the larger stick figures in the detail seem really blurry... is that in the design? You should consider trying to sharpen them up.



I'm never a fan of white tees; I'd really love to see this on an obnoxiously bright colour with the stick figures in greyscale.



Critique me back if you can?

Poco, Tito & Lucci

Expecting something?

Pretty Baby

If it eases your pain, elliemaybe, it's actually on a silver gray which is a very light gray, but not white, nevertheless. : )



As for the blurriness of the larger stick figures, that's a result of the blending mode of the color on top of the black and white figures. Each stick has an 'aura' of color around it to create the color effect from a distance. It may appear a bit blurry, but I doubt it would make our break the design. Although...I could try the sharpen tool in PS. Hmm... : )



Also, it could be the compression of the image to fit in a swf. I notice that some figures look blurrier than others. Perhaps I can fit a tad larger file size.



Thanks for the comments guys. I'm glad you all like it. : D

dang thats a great concept. They guys lips are super fat though. He looks like a douche from some boy band.

Ya this is pretty tight. I say it's ready!!

I'm sorry he looks like a Jonas Brother. : P

Not much I can do about it now though.

very cool idea!

Flippin' eck! There's a lot of time and patience that's gone in to that. I think it's probably ready to be subbed.

Ya, the first time I looked at this, I didn't even realize this was made entirely of stick figures. That's CRAZY!! Great Job!!

Critique my design?

Alright, I think I'll sub this one. However...



Question: Should I have the 1st slide as the 1st slide or reverse them? (2nd slide first)



Thank you all for your kind comments. It means a lot. : D

Love the concept and the work you've put in there. Would sub it, but I would reverse the slides, so the detail level is on the first one. Otherwise you'll risk people clicking through because they 'just' see a face. Good luck with it!

Really nice work! I think the presentation is perfect as is! Sub!

Sub'd and pending approval. Hopefully it'll get through!

Very cool. Neat concept. looks better with the shading on the face and I think it's ready to submit.



Please check out and score So Mr. Kitty...We Meet Again.

Alrighty it's up for scoring!



Thanks for all the help guys. It's been invaluable.



I Only Draw In Stick Figures

ur amazing!..i love the shading, thats crazy!

Great concept. I would have the slide showing the image with stick figures shown first. It definately makes it more unique. And thank you advice wise!