Ok so i whipped this up. Not sure if the concept is good enough. The placement? Are all the design elements needed? Such as the guy on the right...



Black or brown?



any critiques will be greatly appreciated. I am quite indecisive about things at the moment.



Thank you

Here's a bigger view in black. Placement still the same. Please help...



I wish i was a glow worm, a glow worm's never glum, cos how can you be grumpy when the sun shines out your bum. :D

i like it on the brown

great idea but i dont think the guy to the right is necessary.



the perspective of the (i presume) matchbox is slightly off and if it is a match box maybe have the bug to the left lighting it from there?

This is hilarious, I disagree with bovy, both are needed. One thing with the match though perhaps he should be lighting it from the stricker on the side of the box instead of from his hand, the thing he's holding seems a little odd. Love the look on the fly's face, classic!


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thanks for the input guys. I'll see what I can do

ahahaha what a funny idea! maybe you dont need this line in the back.



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Ok I've finally gotten around to reworking this. I've removed the line in the back, made the box more matchboxy and made the dude strike from there..



Umm... I dont know what else to do.. any further suggestions will be appreciated :)

Listen to other suggestions though because we think there's something that could be done to give it that "wow" but we don't know what it is....sorry! We love it the way it is though :]



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I took the guy on the right away... Placement changes

haha this is so funny and the characters are adorable. I think I'd like to see it placed a little higher on the shirt, but overall I seriously love this design. Good work!

Aw man...I really liked the guy on the right - I think that gave more of the element of "peer pressure" because there were two of them and one of him... I like the placement better higher up on the chest too!

Thanks guys. I'll keep the guy on the right.



Any suggestion on how to make it more peer pressury? Perhaps the guy on the right showing off his glowy bit in the face of the fly? Not sure...

I've added another victim on le back. Moved placemet higher. And did some third thing.... Okay not really.



Any further suggestions? thanks :)

Oh pooh onna stick. Left shirt is front and right is back. sorry

help please

Nice idea. I think that the one on the back is a bit too much (but on the other hand not many people will see it). I would add another color and use it for shade. This will anchor the subjects to the background and give it a more realistic and professional look. Good luck.



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Whenif you add shade dont forget to mind the lights which lights emitted from the bugs. Cheers.

I really like the one on the back! Is the one on the box a mosquito?

I love the guy on the back!!!

I haven't had a chance to look at this design for a while but it is really coming along!



Thanks for returning the second character to the front, it was what made the shirt. I'm not sure if the dude on the back is necessary and it may be something that would make threadless go "hmmm, not sure if this is worth printing on both sides".



The only other thing is the glow on the guy on the back is the best, you should mimic that for the other characters and the flames.



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Haha! I love this idea! I really don't have any suggestions for improvement. The character on the back is really funny, but Disgruntled Pacifist may be right, he could make or break the design.



Awesome work!

I clicked submit this, BUT IF you haven't gotten 8 colours yet, I think you should add just one more colour for some shading. It may be something to really seperate the background (t-shirt) from the foreground and really bring this to life.



But I think it's a humourous concept, I like it. XP

Thanks for the support guys. I'll try the shading/shadows idea out. I am not really good at such technical thingies though so I may screw it up...



I shall try and put up the result for further comment.. Thanks for the help till now :)

Looks great as is IMO, could work on both black and brown shirts. Although i'm interested to see your next version with the suggested shading. Don't worry too much about "screwing it up", you can always go back to this version, cuz it already works pretty well. Adding shading and more color would just be for cosmetic purposes or to make it more eye-catching. Anyway nice work, i think you're about ready to submit.



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Ah the "Shadows" have been added. I'm not certain about it though.

I think its good but you should also add light on the floor. I think this will improve the design.

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Haha, great design. Very simple but still giggling

this made me laugh I quite like it but I'm not sure if I'd wear it on a T-shirt



Any suggestions on mine would be good

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Thank you all for your valuable input on this project. I think I'll submit this one. I can't seem to get the lighting off the floor to work. I appreciate all of your critiques and words of encouragement.



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Good luck, if it's made into a Tee I'll buy it FOR SURE!

Its up for scoring. Yeah, thank you guys again. you made this design stand a chance... :)

vote please :)



http://www.threadless.com/submission/239915/Peer_Pressure