Cool beans. Fun, clean and simple design. My only recommendations:
1. maybe adjust the right arm so it's more outward, that way you can more clearly see the black ball too.
2. Not too crazy about the shirt color. I'd go with maybe a cream or a sandy brown.
3. It could be fun if you experimented with different items for the joker to juggle. Play around with ideas and see what folks think. You might hit on something really cool. :)
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Looks nice. Just have another look at his left arm and leg. The linework on the arm is a bit uneven. And hte leg seems to be dangling. Put the feet firml;y on the pedals to emphasize pose and movement.
haha, looks great... simple & fun drawing. agree with jeszal about his legs... try to make them a bit clearer. can't really see what he is doing with them... give the black ball a different color of placement, because it's hard to see. have you tried different tee colors?
haha! I love it! I wouldn't change the colors but thats just me. The thing I would suggest at this point is the strips on the one side of the pants ( the long thin ones) pulls my eye right to it so it kinda pulls me from the rest of the picture because its almost visually confusing to me until i focus on it. Also the black ball should be placed somewhere else because it looks like part of his outfit... maybe a different color ball there would help? Or maybe moving it a bit to the right?
Just some thoughts.. I think its great and has come a long way from your original! Good luck! Keep up the good work!
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ah, you fixed his legs... great.. looks much better now!
have you tried other tee colors as well? try not to focus too much on a white tee... i've noticed that a lot of people will not wear white. i think the black ball is still a bit hard to see... what if you change that to the greenish color?... hmm, that might conflict with his face...
Colors are much better... but I'm not that sure about the gray. Also, I'm not sure, but try to color its face blue and see how it works.
Also, this has nothing to do with the shirt, but for the presentation try not to use that gradient, a solir color looks cleaner. Please Critique my Work: Alone on a Bicycle For Two