Ya nice job! I personally would not wear it though just because it makes the person wearing look fat. Also what is the fly pulling out of the fat? I hope this helps! Also i need some help on my design, please comment here
I think I like the tweaked wings version best, it gives it a bit of a realistic feel rather than a "cartoony pristine" feel.......definitely send me one if it gets printed, and I won't use it to clean my toilet or something lol