So I did this little illustration last year sometime, about the progression of male pattern baldness and how hair gradually ends up on the bottom of the face :P

hahahahaha this really made me laugh! Great! maybe without text, illustration is clear enough! ahahaha the law of gravity applies too

Haha that's great. Can you try less head hair on the 2nd face? It looks really similar.



Maybe you can align the arrows so the one on the left starts up high, and by the time it gets to the beard, the arrow is down where it is now. Sort of like staggered, so the arrows move lower as the hair migrates.

Take a look at mine and let me know what you think:



http://www.threadless.com/critique/52855/Always_knock_first#v2

Very funny, excellent idea and well executed.

bump for great justice!

Yes haha. I'd like to see it on other shirt colors too, but I love this idea!

Great job, the only thing I noticed is when he is completely bald, his ears look a little spock-ish and maybe his sideburns should be a bit higher.



My design

lose the text, totally kills it.

i agree, this is very self explanatory, but i love it a lot



critique mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/54107/My_Cheese_Is_Grilled

lose the text i shall!any other suggestions? are the arrows ok etc etc

No text, and then I will just agree with The Jerf in the thinks he said.



Good good good.

Ok so I've made some slight changes, the second heads hairline is further back & the bald heads sideburns are higher.



Have some various colour options here, what do you think??

also changed the arrows to be slightly staggered...

Looks good, I like it on olive green, I think the colors, especially the brown, just work really well on that shade. Adding more of a receding hairline on 2 was good, but I think number 3 could stand to have even less hair.



Check out los dos amigos up for scoring.

I would also say olive green :)



you can get the tee texture pack here

http://www.threadless.com/profile/115982/Manos/blog/304635/Get_your_t_shirt_textures_HERE

thanks for the link man, come in quite handy :)

Ok, so this is how the design would be on an olive tee, and the placement....

Very good. Beautiful, subtle colors work great with the olive. Concept is simple, clear and very humorous. Doesn't need anything else. I would submit it.

hahaha! This is awesome. Submit it!



PS Thanks for your feedback :-)

ha! i like it.

just a thought to try, perhaps, what would it look like if there was a bit more symmetry - if his beard ended up being exactly the same as his hair but upside down?

also, not sure you need the arrows.

thanks for looking at my monsters.

hehe, looking good. Though i'd like to see some comb-over action in man #3.

Love the concept! So true! lol. I think you should maybe make the arrows a bit bigger...



I'd like to hear your comments on my design. =)

Love Knows No Bounds

hahah excellent, try losing the arrows or a bit higher and bigger

excellent job



comment on mine?



http://www.threadless.com/critique/54248/World_s_Most_Fierce_Bullet

lol I love it. The only thing I can suggest is maybe start greying the hair as you go farther down the line



check mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/54338/

Very nice idea, but I have to agree with "Dexter Spandex".

Do not "grow" the mustache but only the beard and when you are finished make the beard the same as the hair (upside down of course).

Comment on mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/54602/KING_FROG

this it up for submission

http://www.threadless.com/submission/236019/The_Balding_Man



thanks for everyones input!!

vote for it Here!!

Heh awesome.



Check out V3 of my POP entry ?