A first shot. Not much to say on it. Photoshop work, kinda goin for an abstract picture with some emotion shot in there.



Really looking for critiques on composition, placement, color.



let me know if ya like it or not

new placement

I like the drawing and placement but these are difficult colors! I can imagine it with happy colors and some human skintone.

Interesting thought, I'll try some stuff out thanks.

Right now it is pretty hard to see that the orange is tears, so either it'¨s just the deign that's small on screen, or you should make the tears in her eyes slightly more visible or bigger.



Other than that I feel like non of the colors truly pop, it needs to have one of the colors with a flare. Awesome other than that :D

What if you omitted the white? (or replaced it with a more subtle color or just black) Then the orange would really pop more. Right now it seems to me that the key parts of the image (tears, face) are conflicting a bit with the generous use of white. :)



Otherwise, awesome loose style!! :) I like it!

Crits are greatly appreciated. I agree, the white was too harsh, took away from the image a bit.



Some color variations. Think my favorite is the red one.

Much better with warm colors! In the blue ones she is drowning

I like the red color for the idea. Tears usually heat us up, throwing us intensively into life. But her skintone is not healthy.. have you tried the face in a light brown or beige going into orange? A little orange pops the blue of the tears, too.

I love the bottom two...colors blend very well in those. I think you should totally submit any of those two.

nice work! really a wonderrful piece of abstract art! i actually like the 2 at the bottom. the red one would be my favorite, i guess, but as pixelstuff said, maybe try to bring out the tears in thyt one a little more. also i think the size of the design on the shirt is just a little bit too big. with that said, i wouldn't know what else to change....

i really liked the comment you left on my WIP. could you by any chance tell me how to do that watercolor effect or show me some tutorial about that? cause i really wanna give it a shot. i think i'm just gonna try like 4 different ways of coloring it and then i'll decide which one works best for that drawing. thx again.

I like the bottom 2 also. I agree that the tears should be clearer given the title.



I am not sure it tells enough of a story tho. I like the blue one because it could be like calpyso of the sea - and you could add subtle sea elements into it. And the red one is more like a firey venus - i just think it needs something more? What is she looking at for example?



hope that helps :)

Grunge up the illustration on the fast a little and I think it would look better as a whole.

I like the yellow shirt best

blues on blue is the best for me! with gold tee in a close second.

i like the bottom two too... colours are pleasing and just some small contrasts...

as for placement i like the size on the 1st version...

Not sure if I am going backwards or forwards on this. Does the man add or subtract? I'm still very unsure on the colors as well. Critiques have been excellent thanks so much. Please, keep em coming.

i like the design a lot, but idk the color scheme doesn't seem right just yet. very good job though!

i think you should lose the guy... and if the tears are already flying with the wind why do you have more streaming down?

A recovery sub. As after my last version it only took two critiques to realize it had been a bad idea. The Crits where much appreciated, thanks, sometimes ya need someone to tell you you were being just plain dumb.

Going back to where it was working.

me thinks it's good now... but still prefer the colour of the face in v3 (the dark red one)

But that's just me :D

i also like the bottom left blue colour scheme...

The blue colors spill from the eyes looks awesome. I like these colors although I agree that the purple face in v3 looks better, also try the blue one i think tht one also wud look good.



hey i revised my design as per the feedback can you help me choose between last two revisions, pls?