I just want to thank everyone who commented and gave me advice on this in the critique. You all helped make this better!!!

I haven't seen any of the other versions, but this looks great. It's a good concept executed very nicely. You must have put a lot of hours into this, I think it's ready to go, good luck in the competition.

That's cool. Funny idea!

great illustrative style! i think you should ust go on and submit

Really nice! I think it's ready