Ever imagined the upper class behaving like middle class or even *scoff* lower class citizens? well now you don't have to with this impressive shirt.



willing to change colour of vomit, t-shirt in background or anything else.

love the idea. I think the vomit and tshirt should be different colours. Maybe greeny yellow for V and dark grey for T. Also, you need a comma between REGINALD and IT.



comment mine if you would be so kind

love the idea. I think the vomit and tshirt should be different colours. Maybe greeny yellow for V and dark grey for T. Also, you need a comma between REGINALD and IT.



comment mine if you would be so kind

thanks for the advice mate, much appreciated.

I do love the expression on the right guys face

cheers gimpness, it's a face of so much class he sold his emotions long ago.



did invest in dissatisfaction though.

Ever imagined the upper class behaving like middle class or even *scoff* lower class citizens? well now you don't have to with this impressive shirt.





willing to change colour of vomit, t-shirt in background or anything else.

i changed the colour and the vomit and the text, and admittedly it does look better

yeah, I agree. I can't think of much that needs to be done but the text does get a little hard to read, especially "regurgitate". Would a black outline help do you think?

awwwshum :)

yeah, i think it's just because of the size of the image it looks a little hard to read, i could try putting an outline around the text,

do you think it's hard to read because it's white, or because it's too thin?

=mishmish



fantabulous

better than the last? cheers mate

do you guys really think it would work better with a black outline around the text?

love it:)

Funny stuff.

The text would be easier to read if the design was lower down with the text above it, with no overlap.

This setup would work better if you put the tops of their hats in.

Just a suggestion.



Have a look at mine if you get the chance.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/53333/be_cool

how about the text being above the heads?

where's the david carradine one???

am i still able to change the design if i've submitted it in for judgment?



the david carradine one, is a touchy subject, i'm fairly sure they wouldn't let me put it up.

love it wld probs prefer with out the text or with a small poor child looking up covered in regurgitate

I think the wording would read better, "Oh, I say" rather than "Oh dear" and also, the word should be "regurgitant" or "regurgitation" , regurgitate is the action rather than the substance. You could put it, "Oh, I say, Reginald, you appear to have regurgitated all over this fine shirt"

I agree with the person above re the grammar. Also, what about the words in red? and possibly below the vomit? and/or maybe a bit smaller? Just a thought.

I think youve got a flare for this sort of thing anyway.

Would still like to see the D.C one mass produced one day

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actually i like the idea of the child, but i'll have to work it hard to keep it under the colour constraints.



also thanks guys for the grammar corrections, i'll work them in to the next version.