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bengineer on Sep 16 '09 great idea and style. i don't like what you've done with his right foot and head to make them pop out more, though. i'd lose the green outline. you can keep them from fading into the doors by having the light green lines on the doors stop right where the foot/head begins. hope that helps ;)
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i agree with bengineer about the foot. i think it should more like the other one or something. it just looks like you got lazy with it.
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I think the foot looks fine, just add a llittle more detail to show that one has a shoe and one doesnt. Your style is very consistent save for the bricks. I would make the lines between them less crisp. good work, love zombies.
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ibyes on Sep 16 '09 bengineer -Thanks. I agree about the outlines around the head/foot.
pindian-He is wearing a shoe on one foot and the other is bare, is that coming through right now. Which foot is the one I got lazy on? |
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ibyes on Sep 16 '09 notnorm- I didn't love the bricks either, good point.
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haha, i like this... It is a little static though. I can understand that he's skipping the gym but you could have his eyes fixed on the chess club door or have the gym door swinging closed like he just came from there with no luck. Or another perspective of the back of the zombie choosing the left one
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ibyes on Sep 16 '09 EricDiaz- Good call, it could be more dynamic for sure. I will give it a shot.
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maybe u can have one of his arms inside the gym making it seem like he try to lift weights and his arm fell off?
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ibyes on Sep 17 '09 bump for the morning
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bennyd302 on Sep 23 '09 i think this is great, I would use the brick pattern around the scene, sort of forming a half cirlce to give it placement on the shirt.
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ibyes on Sep 23 '09 Thanks, Thats a good idea about the bricks, I'll give it a shot.
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Maybe you could change the perspective just a bit? So that the gym is sort of behind him? just a bit, so that it's not frontal?
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ibyes on Oct 26 '09 I was thinking what if instead of a chess club and a gym, I made the the zombies choices a blonde and a brunette. He would be ignoring (passing) the blonde girl to get to the brunette. I know this is a stereotype, but do you think it would work?
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Anyway I have made some improvements. . Comments
and crits welcome.