I agree! everything is perfect, just soften the edge



El-Lo-Al! Mind helping me out =(

agreed. this is really cute ;)



Pls score & comment on my adorable little body seller!

Wow, really cool drawing.

As said above, try to soften the edges...and maybe also just add a very little touch of colour, on the marshmallow...could be fun to make it more obvious by adding colour to it!!



Can you please comment and/or vote on my design??

Chinese medicine

i like his cute little face. just make it blend more with the shirt.



let me know what you think of mine before i submit

I like this more as an illustration than a t-shirt design. I agree with pindian to blend it in more with the shirt.



My Design

I softened all of the edges this time, does that work better?

Yeah I think it works better this way. I really like it.



If you could look at mine I would greatly appreciate it!

I'm digging your illustration and the softened edges work much better now. Maybe try a chest placement with this, even if you have to remove some of the white at the top. looking good!

Excellent illustration. Fun design. The softened edges do improve the look on a shirt. I like the current placement, but it would also look good on the chest. Go ahead and submit.



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I love it but I don't know I think it would look a little nicer with maybe some green thrown in. This may just be personal preference. Super cute design!



Could you take a look at mine, please?

Aw, this is really adorable. However the placement would be better on the chest.

final version hopefully? I just added color this time.

Awesome!

It's very cute! When you sub it, show the placement on an actual tee on a person, and also let us see the illustration in detail. Good luck!

I like the drawing, technically though smores are graham crackers, chocolate AND marsmallows

It's a great illustration and I love the shadow it casts, very cute character I must say. But there's something about the wing that seems a little odd it's like it misses one? Or is the body covering the second wing? Keep up the good work!

Would you critique mine?