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Dexter Spandex on Sep 10 '09
absolutely fab illo! love it.
personally, i'm not feeling the colour scheme, maybe experiment with a different palette? could just be me tho, all personal taste. If you get a moment, please pop by and comment/vote for my robot |
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Dexter Spandex on Sep 10 '09
absolutely fab illo! love it.
personally, i'm not feeling the colour scheme, maybe experiment with a different palette? could just be me tho, all personal taste. If you get a moment, please pop by and comment/vote for my robot |
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blockspikes on Sep 10 '09
: D
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ends-wealth corp. on Sep 10 '09
Thanks, I will work with the colors.
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Nemperez on Sep 10 '09
THIS RULES!!!!!!!!
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Chantizzlebitch on Sep 10 '09
LOVEEE IT....THE COLORS ARE PERFECT!!
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GeoffreyNoJutsu on Sep 10 '09
what about adding some color dynamics to the letters? i still want to see more color. there's so much going on but so little of it is grabbing my attention. knowhatimean, Vern?
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abmoney on Sep 10 '09
I would definetly wear this (love the details)...especially if it was on a black shirt w/ "accept no imposters' streched on the back of the neck across the shoulders
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hocdesigns on Sep 10 '09
nice work...
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ends-wealth corp. on Sep 12 '09
No Imposters Allowed.
Sorry guys I accidentally deleted the last critique but thanks for commenting and please do so on this one as well |
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ends-wealth corp. on Sep 12 '09
No Imposters Allowed.
Sorry guys I accidentally deleted the last critique but thanks for commenting and please do so on this one as well |
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like your style and detail of the illustration a lot. looks very nice, can't think of anything to change. great colors, too :)
PLS SCORE MINE and check out the "Ancient Geeks". |
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hocdesigns on Sep 12 '09
better contrast, looks good. i like the background color, would be a good shirt color. and i can see it on a white tee as well....
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ends-wealth corp. on Sep 12 '09
word. Well time to finalize it and take it to the vote section man. Please vote on it.
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Crumbnumber1 on Sep 12 '09
awesome awesome. if i see this while scoring, it's getting a $5
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Crumbnumber1 on Sep 12 '09
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rainpanda on Sep 12 '09
i love how busy it is (:
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ends-wealth corp. on Sep 14 '09
No Imposters Allowed.
Sorry guys I accidentally deleted the last critique but thanks for commenting and please do so on this one as well |
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pindian on Sep 29 '09
i love the line work :D
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Bankside on Sep 29 '09
This isn't normally the style I go for, but as far as this genre is concerned this is an awesome piece. I would integrate things more into the balloon. Like... have it seem to grow from the balloon instead of layering in front and behind. But yeah. Damn solid.
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ends-wealth corp. on Sep 29 '09
please rate it.
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cjgammon on Sep 29 '09
very yellow submarine. i like it.
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sertansaltan on Sep 29 '09
I would look very nice on a tee. Good job.
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ends-wealth corp. on Sep 29 '09
If you are going to comment or not please rate the graphic cause it gives me a better idea of what percentage actually likes the design.
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mwshorts on Sep 29 '09
the left most balloon stripe up top seems like a pretty big bulge to me - other than that I like the colors and the illo!
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8bitcat on Sep 29 '09
I'd have to agree with above, what's your thought behind the phrase "Accept No Imposters"? I only ask because it's a very interesting, stylized design, but I don't see the connection. Also most people don't seem to like text in designs unless it's absolutely necessary. Then again, maybe the phrase is just quirky enough to appeal to people, who knows, tough call.
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ends-wealth corp. on Sep 29 '09
Well think about it like this "Happiness: Accept No Imposters" I think it makes sense. And I think the text is one of the best parts so I am going to keep it. I will try different colors at the top besides pink. I have to change all the colors on this one, they are off and not balanced but you'll the difference in the next version.
-Thanks |
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D-Alien on Sep 29 '09
wow what an illu! great indeed, totally trippy, but yes, the meaning of all this is a bit dim but why not?
please crit mine: Funny Rodeo v3 |
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I really like the illustrative style and the bright, but tamed color scheme! Submit!
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Cool! I don't see where to improve it other than possibly making "happiness" a bit bigger- I didn't notice it until I read these comments.
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fasterflame21 on Sep 29 '09
Not quite my style, but it is good quality. I agree with robbielee, "happiness" could be bigger.
If you have time, check out the new version of my Eagle Design |
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8bitcat on Oct 01 '09
Oh I totally missed the "Happiness" my bad. That does make more sense. And I think the color scheme is mighty fine right now, I'd go with it as is. :)
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Nice work. Kinda reminds of the Beatles cartoon "Yellow Submarine". That's a good thing by the way! I think it's ready to sub.
The real me. The geeks of tomorrow. |
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ends-wealth corp. on Oct 29 '09
No Imposters Allowed.
Here it is the final color way!! I think it works pretty well I was worried about the colors for a while but I'm settled now! |
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lizsmithson on Oct 29 '09
Looks so jingle jangle it looks like it came out of 1970-something. I think it's ready :]
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lizsmithson on Oct 29 '09
If you have time - would you mind critiquing mine?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/55694/Hoot http://www.threadless.com/critique/55696/Phone_Call_to_Picasso http://www.threadless.com/critique/55707/Can_o_Rock |
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Am Crew on Oct 29 '09
Tha...that...that's cooL!!! sUBmit
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bdling on Oct 29 '09
This looks awesome! the colours a big improvement. I love how this looks and I say submit sir!
i've got one too: http://www.threadless.com/critique/54637/Royal_Flying_Machine |
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bruckerm on Oct 29 '09
Beautiful! I think this is a keeper. The colors and design are amazing. The only suggestion I would have is to make the word "happiness" a little more obvious, but not really necessary. Really cool stuff though.
Thanks for positive comments on Sustainably Energized. |
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frostedlemoncoward on Oct 29 '09
Awesome detail! Submit this!
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Bio-bot 9000 on Oct 29 '09
submit!
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R Thull on Oct 29 '09
Great! Nice touch with the mouth in the "O".
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odd one on Oct 29 '09
WOW I think this would make a great print, SUB
crit mine? http://www.threadless.com/critique/55522/Nothing_but_a |
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Freak on Oct 29 '09
I like this, great colours too.
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Christopher Basquatch on Oct 30 '09
The colour of the characters left and right of the 'NO' troubles me a bit. I think cos they're grey on grey, they wall back quite a bit from the design. But no-one else seems to be troubled so maybe ignore me. It's a really great design btw
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ends-wealth corp. on Nov 14 '09
No Imposters Allowed.
Sorry Sorry submitted the wrong size |
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LuciaL on Mar 19 '10
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OINKO on Mar 19 '10
great job. it's weird i like it.
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Musarter on Mar 19 '10
This is awesome. Go for it.
Please check mine out: http://www.threadless.com/critique/64373/Brain_Fart |



Sorry guys I accidentally deleted the last critique but thanks for commenting and please do so on this one as well