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The detail you put in this face makes a great illustration. However to be honest as a t-shirt i am not feeling it. If you really want to have a design printed as a shirt on here. Study the trends of all the winners and recent printed shirts to get a feel of what themes are popular. Good luck!
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hmm ok then, i'll try to fix it, maybe put something behind the man, thanks a lot for your information! cheers!
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Very weird. Weird is good. I'd loose the text though. Also, I think it needs to be weirder. I'm not sure what. Maybe a third eye tatoo. Maybe glasses made of cement. Maybe one of those fake arrows through the head. Maybe put the whole face in a starburst. I don't know. The point is it's a very good, thoughtful piece.
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Cool illustration! I'm not sure you need the write under the face, good luck!!!! ;-)
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thanks you very much you guys! wait up for the 2nd version haha
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I think the head is to big on the tee. I would change the shirtcolor and the facecolor to make it look more consistent. You donīt need the words, the typeface doesnīt fit to the illustration anyways.
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I didn't check out your blog last night. A read a little of it and saw a few images. All the images I saw look like they would work very well as silkscreen t's. ( with first seperating out the colors. )
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thank you all! stay tune for the 2nd version!
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Don't leave links to your critique on people's designs up for scoring please.
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great illustration and detail ...
lose text ... try different tee colors ... plz vote $ comment... Want to win 100$ ? |
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Niec but maybe find some better font for the text
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He said " at least i am far from earth now, filthy earth ".
Please score him, and may he rest for sure on Threadless fabric..